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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two visual elements: a line graph and a bar chart. The line graph details visits to and from the UK between 1979 and 1999, with "visits abroad by UK residents" rising from about 12 million in 1979 to 55 million in 1999; "visits to the UK by overseas residents" increasing from 10 million in 1979 to 28 million in 1999. The bar chart illustrates most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 with France leading at about 11 million visitors, followed by Spain with approx. 9 million, USA with around 4 million, Greece at nearly 3 million, and Turkey with about 2 million.

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The line chart illustrates the number of people visiting the UK or visiting abroad from the UK. Meanwhile the bar chart depicts the preference of the UK citizens toward 5 different countries.

overall, both of the travel to and from the UK data showed a stable rise from 1979 to 1999. regarding the table, while france was the most popular country among UK residents, the opposite was true for turkey.

To begin with the line chart, The data of visiting abroad began with around 15 millions in 1979, which gradually increased to 20 millions between 19784 and 1989. A similar pattern with a lower extent could be seen in the data of visiting to the UK with the number of overseas visitors was only 5 millions lower. After that the number of UK residents going abroad jumped significantly to nearly 60 millions in the end of the period which twice as much as that of foreigners at the same time.

Regarding the bar chart, the data of France stood at the highest point with approximately 12 millions to reach the most well-loved position in 1999. followed by that was the approximately 10 millions that of Spain. USA, Greece and turkey showed few differences in the number of UK visitors which only below 5 millions in the same year.

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millions: 7

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing both the line graph and the bar chart, and it includes an overview of the main trends. The data is generally accurate, though there are minor inaccuracies (e.g., starting value of 15 million instead of 12 million, and the final value of nearly 60 million instead of 55 million). The bar chart section is adequately covered, but the description of the USA, Greece, and Turkey could be more precise. The report is well-structured with clear paragraphs, but there are some grammatical and punctuation errors (e.g., 'overall' should be capitalized, '19784' is a typo, and some sentences lack proper punctuation). To improve, ensure data accuracy and refine language for clarity and cohesion.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for the line graph and bar chart. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'the data of visiting abroad' and 'which twice as much as that of foreigners'). The overview is present but could be more clearly separated from the details. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph has a single clear focus. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons (e.g., 'stable rise', 'jumped significantly', 'well-loved position'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward collocations (e.g., 'the data of visiting abroad', 'the preference of the UK citizens toward', 'which twice as much as'). To improve, use more precise and natural vocabulary, such as 'the number of visits abroad by UK residents' and 'twice the number of overseas visitors'. Also, avoid informal or imprecise terms like 'well-loved' in an academic context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'overall, both of the travel to and from the UK data showed a stable rise' should be 'Overall, both the number of visits abroad and visits to the UK increased steadily.' There are also issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence fragments (e.g., 'followed by that was the approximately 10 millions that of Spain'). To improve, focus on writing complete sentences, using correct verb tenses, and ensuring subject-verb agreement. Proofreading for punctuation, especially commas and periods, is also recommended.

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