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Band 6+: The chart below gives information about adults with education at high school level in six countries in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar chart showing the percentage of individuals aged 55-64 and 25-34 with high school education in 2010 across six countries: Germany, USA, Russia, South Korea, Brazil, and China. Germany: 55-64 year-olds at 86%, 25-34 year-olds at 99%. USA: 55-64 year-olds at 90%, 25-34 year-olds at 100%. Russia: 55-64 year-olds at 88%, 25-34 year-olds at 99%. South Korea: 55-64 year-olds at 35%, 25-34 year-olds at 98%. Brazil: 55-64 year-olds at 20%, 25-34 year-olds at 60%. China: 55-64 year-olds at 20%, 25-34 year-olds at 40%.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of adults who enter high school across six nations in 2010.

Overall, the USA is the nation with the highest number of adults entering school, while the opposite was true for China. In addition, high school education was more common with people aged 25-34 in almost every nation, except the USA.

Regarding the three leading nations, the proportion of the adult age group in Germany displayed insignificant differences, at around 82%. However, the USA was the only country that had a higher proportion of people aged 55-64 than younger people, at about 91% and 88% respectively. Besides that, about 92% of young Russian achieved high school qualifications, as rejected to 75% of the older ones.

For the remaining nation, South Korea recorded the highest those who in 25-34 category, at nearly 100%. In contrast, it left older population behind, at 43%. Similarly, in Brazil, the proportion of those who in 25-34-year-olds was double of those who in older group that has finished the high school level, at 55% and 23% respectively. Additionally, China hit the bottom in both age group, at exactly 20% for those who in 25-34 category and 10% for the opposites one.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 5

proportion: 4

those: 4

nation: 3

people: 3

25-34: 3

group: 3

older: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the chart and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some omissions. For example, the USA has 100% of 25-34 year olds with high school education, and China's figures are also not quite right. To improve, ensure data accuracy and include all key information. Also, the writing could be more concise and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate level of coherence and cohesion. The information is generally presented in a logical order, but the transitions between some sentences and paragraphs could be smoother. For instance, the shift from discussing the leading nations to the remaining nations feels somewhat abrupt. Consider using transitional phrases to better connect ideas and improve the flow of the report. Paragraphing is generally acceptable, but could be refined to better group related information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or sophisticated. For example, 'the opposite was true for China' could be rephrased for greater impact. There are also some instances of unnatural phrasing, such as 'displayed insignificant differences'. Expanding your vocabulary and focusing on more natural expressions would enhance the lexical resource of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tenses ('enter high school' should be 'had high school education'), incorrect preposition use ('rejected to' should be 'compared to'), and awkward phrasing ('the highest those who in 25-34 category'). While the overall meaning is usually clear, these errors detract from the report's overall quality. Focus on improving your grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to enhance the clarity and impact of your writing.

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