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Band 4+: The chart below gives information about doctors practicing in Australia over a 30-year period, including their gender and country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows the number of doctors in Australia, amounting to 300,000 in 1986, 640,000 in 1996, and 800,000 in 2006. In 1986, the male/female doctor ratio is approximately 42%/18%, in 1996, about 40%/20%, and in 2006, approximately 42%/22%. For Australian/other nationality doctors, 1986 shows roughly 40%/10%, 1996 shows about 38%/20%, and 2006 shows approximately 42%/24%.

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The table gives information about number of doctors in Australia, whilist the first shown bar chart presents the comparison of men and women doctors index. The last bar graph compares australian doctors against other nationality doctors.

Overall, in the table, the highest number was in 2006. In the first chart, the highest percentage was women in 1996. In the last, hit the peak was Australian doctors twice.

As for table, the lowest point was 300,000 in 1986, whereas the highest point was 800,000 in 2006. In the 1996, doctors was roughly 640,000. In terms of bar chart, Australian doctors doctors was hit the peak twice, approximately 60 percentage, respectively in 1986 and 2006. The lowest point was in 2006 just under 40 percentage. In the 1996, just below half percentages was Australian doctors, while just under 50 percentages was other nationality.

Concerning the first bar chart, the lowest percentage was male doctors slightly above 40 percentages in 1996. In the same year, the highest percentage was women almost 55 percentage. In the 2006, both gender was slightly similiar around 50 percentage. In the 1986, male doctors was over 50 percentage, while female doctors was under 47 percentage.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

doctors: 11

percentage: 9

chart: 4

australian: 4

highest: 4

table: 3

first: 3

women: 3

lowest: 3

point: 3

under: 3

percentages: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The organization is not very clear, and the language contains errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information jumps between different aspects of the charts without clear transitions, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to group related information. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast,' 'similarly,' 'however') to link ideas and sentences. Organize the report into paragraphs that focus on specific aspects of the data, such as overall trends, gender comparisons, and nationality comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'hit the peak,' 'slightly similiar'). Use a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons more accurately. For example, instead of 'hit the peak,' consider using 'reached its highest point' or 'peaked.' Instead of 'slightly similiar,' use 'relatively similar' or 'comparable.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Proofread carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors. Vary sentence structure to improve readability. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. For example, 'doctors was roughly' should be 'doctors were roughly.'

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