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Band 5+: The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents two pie charts about commuting reasons. For 'Reasons for cycling to work', the percentages are: Health and fitness 30%, Less pollution 30%, No parking problems 15%, No costs 13%, and Faster than driving 12%. For 'Reasons for driving to work', the percentages are: Comfort 40%, Distance to work 21%, Faster than cycling 14%, Need to carry things to work 14%, and Safer than cycling 11%.

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The pie chart shows the resons why people perfer go to work by car or by bicycle.

Overall, the main reason for driving to work is comfort. In contrast, people who choose cycling think about health benefits and enviroment. In addition, cycling save a lot of money and solve the parking problem. Individuals who need to carry a lot of things to work and cover a long distance perfer drive rather than ride a bike. Both groups think that their way to travel to work is faster than others.

Most people choose cycling for health, enviroment, financial purposes and convinience. Using cycling as fitness to lose weight or stay lean and redusing pollution are main motivation for 30% in each group, while parking accounts 15%. Avoiding high costs problems and speed are mentioned less frequently, at around 13% and 12% respectively.

By contrast, driving is perfered because of comfort, it’s the most important factor. Around 40% of drivers choose car for this reasson. Distance to work account for approximately one in five, meanwhile carrying things to work and long distance present 14% each. A minority of drivers perfer this transport for safety reasons.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cycling: 4

people: 3

perfer: 3

choose: 3

distance: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents the main features of both charts, with some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report incorrectly states that 'carrying things to work and long distance present 14% each' (the chart shows 'Faster than cycling' and 'Need to carry things' at 14%, while 'Distance to work' is 21%). Additionally, the report omits the 'Safer than cycling' reason for driving and misinterprets the 'Faster than driving' reason for cycling. There are also numerous spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'resons', 'perfer', 'enviroment', 'reasson') that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all key categories, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'Both groups think that their way to travel to work is faster than others' is vague). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some sentences are not well-linked. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea with smooth transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'financial purposes', 'avoiding high costs problems'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'resons', 'perfer', 'enviroment', 'reasson', 'convinience') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'redusing pollution', 'stay lean'). To improve, focus on accurate spelling and use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'prefer', 'environment', 'convenience', 'reduce pollution', and 'commute'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('cycling save'), incorrect verb forms ('people perfer go'), and missing articles ('the main reason for driving to work is comfort' is fine, but 'parking accounts 15%' should be 'accounts for 15%'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the range of structures is limited. To improve, practice using a wider variety of sentence structures and ensure grammatical accuracy, especially with verb tenses and prepositions.

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