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Band 5+: The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two pie charts comparing boys' and girls' cultural and leisure activities. Boys' activities include computer games at 34%, basketball at 26%, soccer at 17%, skateboarding at 11%, listening to music at 10%, and reading at 2%. Girls' activities encompass reading at 21%, gymnastics at 11%, computer games at 16%, dancing at 27%, listening to music at 10%, and netball at 15%.

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The pie graph illustrate the information about the statistic of children’s activities. The first graph depict boys cultural and leisure activities and in the second graph tasks where girls participate in.

Overall, it is clear that, listening to music have the same interest in youngest, while computer games and reading have different hight of result. Others activities are different and they distribute into the male and female groups.

Boys more interesting at the computer games which have the highest result of survey and reach 34%, whereas girls prefer dancing more than boys and have 27%, and in computer games less, 16%. Second of the popular activity of girls is reading which show 21%, but boys do not like and have 2% and this indicator the smallest.

Listening the music in two group is 10%, and the same indicator have skateboarding for boys and gymnastics for girls which show on 1% more than music. Soccer on the boys group have 17%, and netball for girls have 15%.

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girls: 5

graph: 3

activities: 3

music: 3

computer: 3

games: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents an overview, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the statement about skateboarding and gymnastics being 1% more than music is incorrect (they are 11%, which is 1% more than 10%, so this is actually correct, but the phrasing is awkward). Also, the report omits some data points and has minor grammatical errors. To improve, ensure all key data is accurately reported and use clearer, more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The overview is somewhat vague and does not effectively summarize the main trends. Paragraphing is present but not always logical, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, focus on creating a clear topic sentence for each paragraph and using a range of linking words and referencing to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there is limited range and flexibility. Some phrases are awkward or imprecise (e.g., 'different hight of result', 'Boys more interesting at the computer games'). There is an attempt to use synonyms and vary language, but it is not always successful. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'account for', 'constitute', 'the highest proportion', 'a minority'), and ensure word choices are natural and accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity and accuracy. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'The pie graph illustrate', 'the first graph depict'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'Boys more interesting', 'which show'), and missing articles/prepositions. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex forms. To improve, review basic grammar rules, practice using a variety of sentence structures, and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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