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Band 4+: The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVDs or videos. Write a report describing the information. You should write at least 150 words. Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.

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The image contains a bar graph with x-axis showing years 2000-2003 and y-axis showing sales in billion dollars from 10 to 40 by increments of 10; three categories of sales are depicted: 'Game Software' with sales of 15, 17.5, 20, and 22.5 billion dollars respectively for 2000-2003; 'DVDs/Videos' with sales of 20, 25, 30, and 35 billion dollars respectively for 2000-2003; and 'CDs' with sales of 32.5, 27.5, 25 and 22.5 billion dollars respectively for 2000-2003.

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The bar chart illustrates data abouy global sales of games such as: CDs and DVDs or videos between 2000 and 2003.

overall, it can be inferred that CDs games the most popular around gamers from 2000 to 2003, and with stable results. In contrast, software and DVD/vidieos percentage raised, however games software have less percentage in the chart.

Looking at the chart we can notice that CDs games result declined from approximately 35 to 32, but their stayed at the first place with the dominance results in global area. Apart from that it could be changed by DVD in the future

By the other hand, DVD and Videos percentage significantly increased in 4 years, initialy they had around 18% and in 2003 were more than 30% with near CDs, and took second palce in the chart. Like them games software steadly raised begin with amount 15% to 19%, nevertheless, it took last place between others.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The description of the data is not always precise, and there are some issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data references and use more precise language to describe trends. Also, ensure that your grammar is accurate and varied.

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The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The ideas are not well-organized, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The introduction is present, but the overview is not very insightful. The body paragraphs attempt to describe trends, but the lack of clear transitions and organization makes it difficult to follow the analysis. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related ideas effectively.

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The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., 'CDs games,' 'dominance results,' 'initialy'). The report does not demonstrate a wide range of vocabulary or sophisticated control of lexical features. To improve, focus on learning and using more precise and varied vocabulary related to describing trends and data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Punctuation errors are also present. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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