Bar Chart

Band 7+: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selectin and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selectin and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows a bar chart representing the percentage of British people donating to charity categorized by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. For ages 18-25, the percentage in 1990 was approximately 17% and around 7% in 2010. In the 26-35 age group, it was about 31% in 1990 and 24% in 2010. For ages 36-50, the percentage was 42% in 1990 and 35% in 2010. In the 51-65 age category, about 35% were recorded in 1990 and 39% in 2010. Finally, for those over 65, there was a percentage of approximately 32% in 1990 and 35% in 2010.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart shows the percentage of British population who donated money for charity by age range between 1990 to 2010.

Overall, people older than 36 years gave more money, compared to those who were younger. Moreover, people aged between 18 and 35 years witnessed a notable decrease in donations in 2010 compared to 1990, while British citizens older than 51 years increased the given money.

In 1990, the percentage of people aged between 36 and 50 years who donated was 42%, before experiencing a slight decrease to 35% in 2010. Similarly, those aged between 26 and 35 years stood at 30% in 1990, dropping to just less than 20% by 2010.

In contrast, in 1990, citizens aged between 51 and 65 years started at 35% , and 31% for those older than 65 years. By 2010, the percentage saw an upward trend, peaking at just less than 40% and 35%, respectively.

Word Count: 152

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 7

between: 5

percentage: 3

people: 3

older: 3

those: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. The data is mostly accurate, though there are a few minor inaccuracies. To improve, ensure all data points are precisely represented and consider adding a more nuanced discussion of the reasons behind the changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overall trends and specific data points are presented logically. To improve coherence, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and that transitions between paragraphs are smooth and logical. For example, you could explicitly link the changes observed in the older age groups to the decreases seen in the younger groups to provide a more cohesive narrative.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and conveys the information effectively. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more precise language to describe the trends and data. For instance, instead of 'slight decrease,' you could use 'marginal decline' or 'modest reduction.' Also, consider using more varied language to describe the percentages and changes, such as 'increased substantially' or 'remained relatively stable.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully review each sentence for subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. For example, in the sentence 'people aged between 18 and 35 years witnessed a notable decrease,' ensure that the verb tense is consistent and that the subject and verb agree. Also, pay attention to the correct use of prepositions and conjunctions to ensure clarity and precision.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

Top five activities of Children in Australia and the United Kingdom (2020)

This bar graph, demonstrates the number of children’s extra activities outside of school in UK and Australia in the year 2020. Overall, children in both countries have showed the least interest in the usage of internet. Australian youngers are more likely to have an interest in socialising with friends and playing sports. While, British kids […]

Band 6+

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.

The provided bar chart and table delineate the number of international students (in thousands) and their proportion relative to the total student population across four English-speaking nations – the USA, the UK, Australia, and Canada – for the years 2004 and 2012. Over the eight-year period, all countries experienced a rise both in the absolute […]

Band 9

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The bar chart compares the percentages of male and female teachers working in six different types of educational institutions in the UK in 2010. Overall, women accounted for the vast majority of teachers in nursery and primary schools, while men were more dominant at universities. The proportions of male and female teachers were almost equal […]

Band 8+

The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people.

The chart illustrates the outcome of a British survey on the types of accommodation individuals liked, which was taken in the year 2005. It is crystal clear that flats were the most popular type of housing in London, whereas detached houses accounted for the lowest percentage of housing in the UK. In 2005, flats were […]

Band 7+

The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates how young people aged 23-34 are housed in the UK. How many percentages of them rent and how many of them own a house. Overall, homeownership experienced a steady downward trend throughout the period, while the proportion of renters saw a substantial rise. Notably, while homeowners outnumbered tenants in the initial years, […]

Band 8+

The graph below gives information about average housing prices throughout the city of Plimsburgh. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrate the typical accomodation costs in the city of Plimsburgh. Overall, we could see that the Uptown housing had the highest prices at the start of the given period, followed by University park, Waterfront and Downtown respectively. While at the end of the given period, University park lead the chart with Uptown, […]

Band 5+

See All