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Band 5+: The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing

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The image shows North America with ~30% in 2008 and ~20% in 2016, Europe ~40% in 2008 and ~50% in 2016, South America ~6% in 2008 and ~12% in 2016, Australia ~3% in 2008 and ~6% in 2016, Asia ~2% in 2008 and ~6% in 2016.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of car sharing usage in countries all over the world between the years 2008 and 2016.

It is clear that in 2008, highest proportion of car was shared in European countries . By the contrast, the portion of car sharing usage in South America in 2016 was the lowest.

Looking at the bar chart in more detail, in 2008 the percentage of car sharing in Northen America dramatically rose from nearly 32% to 52% in 2016. Meanwhile European peole saw a downfall between the period, from almost 60% to 32%.

For the remaining countries,in each and every country the percentage of car sharing significantly rose from the begining ratio, in 2016, about 5% individuals of South America used shared car, which was almost double that for in 2008. Likewise, the proportion of people who used shared car in Australia and Asia rose at the ending of the period.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the distribution of car sharing across regions, but it contains several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. For example, it incorrectly states that North America rose from 32% to 52% and that Europe fell from 60% to 32%, which contradicts the provided visual description. Additionally, the report misidentifies the chart type as a line graph and bar chart, and includes irrelevant or inappropriate comparisons. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data from the visual description, avoid introducing incorrect figures, and ensure the response clearly describes the main trends and comparisons without unnecessary errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the data but lacks a clear overall structure. The introduction is adequate, but the body paragraphs are not logically organized, and the progression of ideas is sometimes confusing. For example, the writer mentions 'the bar chart' when the task refers to a line graph, and the comparison between regions is not consistently maintained. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific comparison or trend. Also, avoid contradictory statements (e.g., 'highest proportion' vs. 'lowest' in the same sentence) and ensure that the data description follows a logical order, such as from largest to smallest or by region.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive, with errors such as 'Northen America' (Northern America), 'European peole' (European people), and 'begining' (beginning). There is an attempt to use a range of words (e.g., 'dramatically rose', 'significantly rose'), but the choices are not always accurate or natural. To improve, expand your vocabulary with more precise terms for describing trends (e.g., 'increased sharply', 'declined gradually', 'remained stable') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid informal phrases like 'in each and every country' and use more formal alternatives such as 'in all remaining regions'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('the highest proportion'), incorrect prepositions ('rose from nearly 32% to 52%' is correct but 'rose at the ending' is not), and subject-verb agreement issues ('European peole saw a downfall'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, such as missing commas and incorrect spacing before periods. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with relative clauses) and review basic grammar rules, especially articles, prepositions, and verb tenses. Proofreading for common errors will also help.

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