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Band 6+: The chart below shows information about the favorite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B.

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The image is a bar chart comparing School A and School B across five different subjects; Social Science, Science, Language, Craft/Drawing, and Sport. School A has the following percentages; Social Science 12.5%, Science 17.5%, Language 10%, Craft/Drawing 12.5%, Sport 40%. School B has the following percentages; Social Science 7.5%, Science 22.5%, Language 20%, Craft/Drawing 35%, Sport 12.5%.

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The table ilustrates data about the preferred subjects, between social science, science, language, craft/drawing, and sport, of 60 students from two educational institutions (school A and school B).

Overall, at school A, students clearly show their favoritism for sports, with more than half preferring them; however, they dislike craft/drawing the most. On the contrary, the opinions are divided at school B, being the latter the most preferred subject, and science the least.

At school A, students strongly agree that the best subject is sport, with more than 35 votes in favor. On the other hand, less than 5 students like craft/drawing, being the least liked subject. Finally, subjects like social science, science, and language are in the middle, and have a figure of preference between 5 and 10 people.

At school B, the most preferred subject is craft/drawing, with a figure of 25 individuals. Next, language has the second place, with a total between 15 and 20 people. To continue with, social science and sport are the third and fourth on the list, having 10 and 5 students, respectively. Finally, science have the lowest rate, with less than 5 students who like it.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

science: 7

students: 6

school: 5

craft/drawing: 4

subject: 4

preferred: 3

between: 3

social: 3

language: 3

sport: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview and specific details about the favorite subjects in both schools. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data representation, particularly in estimating the number of students based on percentages. To improve, ensure precise data interpretation and avoid estimations that deviate from the actual percentages. Also, refine the overall structure for better clarity and flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for each school. However, the transitions between sentences and ideas could be smoother to improve the flow. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, in the overview, you could directly contrast the preferences of School A and School B more explicitly. In the detailed paragraphs, ensure each sentence logically follows from the previous one, and use transition words to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing the data. Terms like 'favoritism,' 'educational institutions,' 'opinions are divided,' and 'individuals' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary related to data comparison and trends, such as 'significantly higher,' 'marginally lower,' or 'a similar proportion.' Also, be mindful of word choice to ensure accuracy; for example, using 'percentage' or 'proportion' might be more accurate than 'votes' or 'people' in some contexts. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The table ilustrates data' should be 'The table illustrates data.' Also, 'with more than half preferring them' could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate article usage. Review and correct these errors to improve the overall grammatical accuracy of the report.

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