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Band 4+: The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million PMT by transportation type in 2002.

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The image displays a bar graph comparing the number of incidents and injuries per 100 million PMT by transportation type in 2002. Commuter rail shows 20 incidents and 17 injuries. Heavy rail reports 50 incidents and 35 injuries. Light rail indicates 75 incidents and 39 injuries. Bus depicts 70 incidents and 60 injuries. Demand response reveals 250 incidents and 175 injuries.

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he chart illustrate the numbers of incidents and injurise per 100 million passenger miles trevelled by transportation type in the year 2002. Overall it can be seen that, the number incidents was too much hige in the given chart, while the number of injurise in less in chart raile.

In the year 2002, the rate of incidents was 20 (PTM) and the and it rosed to 50 per 100 mllion passenger trevelled by tranpotation. After that number of incidents in light rail was extremly incresed up to 85 per 100 million. Simillarly, the rate of incidents was constant in the bus. But it was directly boosted to 230 per 100 mllion passengers in demand respond.

On the other hand, the number of injuris (PTM) was 8 in commuter rail, in the heavy rail it will bcome 40 per 100 million passeng of injuries, wahile it was same in the light rail. After that it was incresed up 170 per 100 millon passenger.

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The report attempts to describe the bar graph but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is weak, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs are disjointed and lack clear connections between sentences. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and improve the overall flow of the report. Consider grouping information based on trends or categories to enhance coherence.

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The vocabulary used is limited and contains inaccuracies ('hige,' 'injurise,' 'trevelled,' 'raile'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable,' 'fluctuated'). Focus on using more precise language to accurately represent the information in the chart. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word forms. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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