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Band 5+: The chart below shows the amount of greenhouse gas emissions produced by different sectors in the UK in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a vertical grouped bar chart titled "UK Greenhouse Gas Emissions by Sector, 2010 and 2020". The vertical axis is labeled "Million Tonnes of CO2 Equivalent (MtCO2e)" with marked values from 0 to 250 at increments of 50, and the horizontal axis is labeled "Sector" displaying five categories: Energy Supply, Transport, Business, Residential, and Agriculture. The legend defines two series: 2010 and 2020. Data values by sector for 2010 and 2020 respectively are: Energy Supply, approximately 245 and 95 MtCO2e; Transport, approximately 124 and 100 MtCO2e; Business, approximately 98 and 70 MtCO2e; Residential, approximately 87 and 67 MtCO2e; and Agriculture, approximately 47 and 46 MtCO2e.

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The provided bar chart depicts the quantities of emitted gas measured in Million tonnes CO2 by energy supply , transport, buisness , residential and agriculture sectors in uk in 2010 and 2020.

Overall , Almost all the sections recorded a slight decrease in gas emission wheras agriculture maintained the same level during the given period.

To begin with , energy supply sector started with the highest gas emitted levels in 2010 by around 250 million tonnes of CO2 . A figure that dropped dramatically in 2020 and reach a total of only 100 million tonnes of produced Co2. Conversly to transport sector , a slight fall of gas emission has been recorded , varrying from nearly 125 to 100 million tonnes.

Regarding Buisness and residential category, they produced roughly the same amount of gas from 2010 until 2020 with figures of 100 and 75 million tonnes respectively. In terms of agriculture it was the only sector with a stable gas volume about 100 million tonnes of induced Co2 during the given period .

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for Business and Residential sectors is incorrectly described as 'roughly the same amount' and the figures are inaccurate (100 and 75 instead of 98/70 and 87/67). The Agriculture figure is also incorrect (stated as 100 instead of ~47/46). The overview mentions 'almost all sections recorded a slight decrease' which is acceptable, but the statement that agriculture 'maintained the same level' is correct. To improve, ensure all data values are accurately reported and avoid vague descriptions. Also, check spelling and grammar (e.g., 'buisness', 'wheras', 'Conversly').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'Conversly to transport sector' is confusing and the transition between sectors could be smoother. The overview is present but could be more precise. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear set of sectors. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'depicts', 'dropped dramatically', 'stable'), but there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'buisness', 'wheras', 'Conversly', 'varrying') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'sections' instead of 'sectors', 'induced' instead of 'emitted'). To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing changes (e.g., 'decline', 'plunge', 'remain steady') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Also, avoid informal or inaccurate terms like 'gas' when 'greenhouse gas emissions' is more precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, missing commas after introductory phrases (e.g., 'Overall , Almost all...'), incorrect verb forms ('reach' should be 'reached'), and subject-verb agreement issues. There are also run-on sentences and awkward constructions. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Proofread to correct punctuation and avoid fragments.

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