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Band 6+: The chart below shows the amount of greenhouse gas emissions produced by different sectors in the UK in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a vertical grouped bar chart titled "UK Greenhouse Gas Emissions by Sector, 2010 and 2020". The vertical axis is labeled "Million Tonnes of CO2 Equivalent (MtCO2e)" with marked values from 0 to 250 at increments of 50, and the horizontal axis is labeled "Sector" displaying five categories: Energy Supply, Transport, Business, Residential, and Agriculture. The legend defines two series: 2010 and 2020. Data values by sector for 2010 and 2020 respectively are: Energy Supply, approximately 245 and 95 MtCO2e; Transport, approximately 124 and 100 MtCO2e; Business, approximately 98 and 70 MtCO2e; Residential, approximately 87 and 67 MtCO2e; and Agriculture, approximately 47 and 46 MtCO2e.

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The chart illustrates the amount of greeshnhouse gas emissions in million tonnes of CO2 equivalent produced by 5 sectors in the UK in two separate years 2010 and 2020.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the amount of CO2 gas released from all secors are high in 2010, compared to the quantity in 2020. However, the amounts released from the agriculture sector was slightly the same.

Upon taking a deeper look at the graph, we will find that energy supply is the highest sector in the emissions of CO2 in 2010 of value reached approximately 245 MtCO2e. Whereas its value in 2020 was about 95 MtCO2e. CO2 released from transport and business sectors were roughly 125 and 100 MtCO2e in 2010 and approximately 100 and 75 MtCO2e in 2020.

Regarding Residential sector, it emitted nearly about 95 and 75 MtCO2 in 2010 and 2020, respectively. Furthermore, agriculture emitted a comparable quantity of CO2 reached approximately 45%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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mtco2e: 4

released: 3

sector: 3

approximately: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and highlighting key data for most sectors. It correctly identifies the overall trend of higher emissions in 2010 compared to 2020, and notes the relative stability in agriculture. However, there are a few inaccuracies and omissions: the residential sector figures are slightly off (87 and 67, not 95 and 75), and the agriculture figure is incorrectly described as a percentage rather than a value in MtCO2e. Additionally, the report could be improved by making more precise comparisons between sectors and ensuring all data points are accurately reported. Overall, the response is well-structured and covers the main features, but minor data errors and a lack of detailed comparison prevent it from achieving a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, an overall summary, and a detailed comparison. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Upon taking a deeper look', and 'Regarding' helps guide the reader. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the final sentence about agriculture is incomplete, which slightly disrupts the flow. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and that all sentences are fully developed.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'illustrates', 'emitted', 'comparable quantity', and 'approximately'. However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'CO2' used repeatedly, 'released' and 'emitted' could be varied). The phrase 'greeshnhouse' is a spelling error, and 'secors' is a typo. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. However, there are several errors: subject-verb agreement ('amounts ... are' should be 'amount ... is'), incorrect verb tense ('was slightly the same' should be 'were slightly the same'), and a missing verb in the final sentence ('reached approximately 45%' should be 'reached approximately 45 MtCO2e'). Punctuation is generally correct, but the final sentence is incomplete. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement and ensure all sentences are complete and accurate.

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