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Band 4+: The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing the number of males and females in different employment statuses. Full-time employed males are 30, females are 20; part-time employed males are 40, females are 60; unemployed males are 60, females are 40; retired males are 60, females are 90; housewives males are 10, females are 80.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of free time enjoying five various employment status by men and women.

Overall, men and women both equally had similar percentage of three categories, employed (Full Time), Unemployed and Retired, these are most the largest percentage we have it. I figure that the females leisure time enjoyed for employed (Part Time) and Housewife.

In terms of men data, the umployed had with around 85%, with 83% of Retired, and 45% of Employed (Full Time). The proportion of enjoying men more than women in those categories, while the Employed (Part Time) and Housewife, they don’t have any percentage of these categories.

In addition, the women had at 40% of Employed (Part Time), with around at 38% of Employed (Full Time), which the lowest percentage in this chart. However, Unemployed and Retired nearly reached at 78% of women, whereus the Housewife had only at 50%.

To sum up, men have been increasing the leisure time in Umemployed and Retired in the future.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by comparing leisure time across employment statuses for men and women, but it contains several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall structure is present, but the inclusion of irrelevant or incorrect information (e.g., percentages not supported by the visual description, mention of 'future' trends) detracts from task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately describing the data from the chart, avoid making unsupported claims, and ensure clear comparisons between categories. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy and clarity to enhance the report's coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to structure the information with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. The overall message is difficult to follow in places due to inconsistent comparisons and a lack of clear logical progression. To improve, focus on creating a clear overall trend in the overview and then systematically compare the categories for men and women, using clear linking words and referencing to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range (e.g., 'percentage', 'categories', 'enjoyed'). There are also inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'proportion of free time enjoying', 'most the largest percentage we have it'). To improve, learn and use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to describing data, such as 'figures', 'rates', 'proportions', 'account for', 'represent', and 'significantly higher/lower'. Avoid informal phrases like 'I figure that'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward structures that significantly impede understanding. Issues include incorrect verb forms ('enjoying', 'have been increasing'), missing articles, subject-verb agreement errors, and unclear sentence constructions. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of tenses for describing data (e.g., simple present). Practice writing clear, simple sentences before attempting more complex ones.

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