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Band 5+: The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The image indicates leisure time in hours per week by sex and employment status for 1998-99, showing: Employed full-time, Males at approx. 45 hours, Females at approx. 24 hours; Employed part-time, Males at approx. 50 hours, Females at approx. 48 hours; Unemployed, Males at 80 hours, Females at approx. 78 hours; Retired, Males at 82 hours, Females at approx. 76 hours; Housewives, Females at 54 hours, with no equivalent data for Males.

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The chart illustrates the leisure hours available for men and women across various employment statuses in a week between 1998 and 1999.

Overall, the men tend to enjoy more leisure hours than women in certain occupation status like full time employment, retired and even when underemployed and on the other hand has absolutely no leisure hours when they are half employed and are househusbands.

Fully employed males enjoy around 50 hours of leisure time whereas the females of same status only enjoy closely 40 hours which is the least of all leisure hours. Unemployed and retired males enjoy the highest leisure hours which is close to 90 hours per week whereas the females of these occupations enjoy a little less around 75 hours.

Half time employed women and housewives have 40 and 55 hours respectively as a leisure time whereas the males in this occupation enjoy a total of 0 hours, that is there are either no men in this occupation or the men have 0 free hours.

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hours: 11

leisure: 7

enjoy: 6

women: 3

occupation: 3

employed: 3

males: 3

whereas: 3

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The report provides a good overview of the data, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The report should be more precise with the data and avoid making assumptions about the reasons for the differences.

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The report is generally coherent, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of paragraphs could be improved.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of imprecise language and repetition. The report could benefit from more sophisticated vocabulary choices.

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The report could benefit from more careful proofreading and editing.

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Band 5+: The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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