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Band 4+: The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The image displays a bar chart titled "The amount of money given to developing nations" in billion dollars, comparing five organizations over four years (2008-2011). Organization 3 has the highest amount in 2009 and 2010, around 2.5 and 2.3 billion respectively, while Organization 1 has the least, less than 0.5 billion each year. The other organizations range between these amounts, with varying contributions each year.

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The bar chart illustrates the finical contribution made by five organization to developing countries from 2008 to 2011.

The most significantly grown was made in 2011 by second organization.At the same year most lowest score was made by organization 5.After 2008 organization 5 show sharply falling.But in the other hand organization 2 incrised triple.And the most stable organization was third.He stayed in one position over 2008 to 2011.Also we can see that organization 3 made same finical contribution for period 2010 to 2011.Organization 1 show an upward trend to grow.In 2009 organization 1 tryied to recover his grown.But in year 2010 to 2011 organization 1 continue showing plumge drop.

In conclusion, we can see the lowes and the most incrising grown made by five organizations for developing countries in period 2008 to 2010.Overal the most increace was made by organization 2.And lowest score was made by organization number 4 in 2011.

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The report attempts to describe the main trends and features of the bar chart, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data to support the observations. The organization of the information is not very clear, and the language used is often imprecise and contains grammatical errors. To improve, focus on providing accurate data references, organizing the information more logically, and using more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report suffers from significant issues in coherence and cohesion. The organization of ideas is unclear, and the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are abrupt. The flow of information is difficult to follow, making it hard for the reader to understand the relationships between different data points. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the overall structure lacks a clear progression of thought. To improve, focus on creating clearer topic sentences for each paragraph, using transition words to connect ideas, and ensuring that each sentence logically follows from the previous one.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice ('finical' instead of 'financial,' 'incrised' instead of 'increased,' 'plumge drop' which is unclear). There is a reliance on simple vocabulary, and more sophisticated language could be used to describe trends and comparisons. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends (e.g., 'fluctuated,' 'remained constant,' 'experienced a decline'). Pay attention to the correct usage of words and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in sentence structure. Punctuation is also used inconsistently. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and carefully proofreading your work for errors. Consider using grammar resources and seeking feedback on your writing to identify and correct recurring mistakes.

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Band 4+: The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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