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The image features a line graph titled "Average monthly cost of mobile phone contracts (January – September 2002)" plotting "Cost (euro)" on the vertical axis (scaled from 0 to 30 in increments of 5) against months along the horizontal axis (Jan to Sep) across four providers: Demo, Lex, Sim TX, and Alpha. Monthly costs (in euros) are recorded as follows: for Demo, Jan: 15, Feb: 16, Mar: 17, Apr: 16, May: 20, Jun: 20, Jul: 25, Aug: 24, Sep: 22.5; for Lex, Jan: 12, Feb: 10, Mar: 13, Apr: 13, May: 14, Jun: 13, Jul: 16, Aug: 16, Sep: 18; for Sim TX, Jan: 5, Feb: 5, Mar: 6, Apr: 7, May: 6, Jun: 5, Jul: 10, Aug: 13, Sep: 25; and for Alpha, Jan: 9, Feb: 8, Mar: 9, Apr: 10, May: 11, Jun: 14, Jul: 10, Aug: 9, Sep: 8.

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The chart given compares the amount of monthly payment of contracts for four different types of mobile phones the Europe between January and September 2002, in euros. Overall, it is apparent from the linear, cost of demo was the highest until the cheapest mobile cell which is sim TX jumped over 20 euros to surpass the demo at the end of the period, which is really big amount.

At the beginning of the year the costs of all of them were below 15 euros and after gradual increase all of them showed significant changes, for example alpha was initially at almost 10 euros and then reached its peak 15 euros in June. This was the same with lex, after which, its costs dropped significantly to almost 7 euros which was lower than its initial cost. When it comes to lex mobile its costs started at 12 euros and after some fluctuations doubled to 28 euros.

Also, there were the cheapest and the most expensive cell mobiles. Demo costed a lot compared to others until September however, the cheapest mobile phones which is sim TX took first place with 25 euros and demo remained in the second place at the start of the Autumn in that year.

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The report attempts to address the task by describing the general trends and some specific data points, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from its effectiveness. Key data points are misreported (e.g., Alpha's peak is stated as 15 euros instead of 14, Lex's cost is said to double to 28 euros, which is incorrect, and Sim TX's final cost is correctly noted but the description of its rise is vague). The report also lacks a clear overview of the main trends, such as the overall increase for most providers and the significant fluctuation of Sim TX. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main features, comparing the providers clearly, and ensuring all data mentioned is correct. Organize the information logically, perhaps by grouping similar trends, and avoid vague or incorrect statements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization of information within paragraphs could be improved. The second paragraph mixes details about Alpha and Lex without clear transitions, and the third paragraph introduces new comparisons without linking back to the overview. Use clearer paragraphing: one paragraph for the overall trend, one for the most expensive providers, and one for the cheapest. Also, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to guide the reader more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some imprecise and informal choices (e.g., 'mobile cell', 'costed a lot', 'really big amount'). There is some attempt at variation (e.g., 'gradual increase', 'significant changes'), but more precise and formal language is needed. Use terms like 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'remained stable', and 'surpassed' accurately. Avoid informal expressions and ensure word choice is appropriate for an academic report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'the Europe' should be 'in Europe', 'it is apparent from the linear' is incomplete, and 'costed' should be 'cost'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, proofread for common errors, use a wider range of structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses), and ensure each sentence is grammatically complete and clear.

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