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Band 5+: The chart below shows the number of apps that were sold in three different stores from 2010 to 2014.

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The image shows a bar chart depicting the total number of apps by app store in thousands from 2010 to 2014. In 2010, iOS App Store had approximately 225, Google Play had around 25, Amazon Appstore had 0. In 2011, iOS App Store had approximately 425, Google Play had around 75, Amazon Appstore had around 25. In 2012, iOS App Store had approximately 650, Google Play had around 350, Amazon Appstore had around 60. In 2013, iOS App Store had approximately 850, Google Play had around 800, Amazon Appstore had around 180. In 2014, iOS App Store had approximately 1350, Google Play had around 1300, Amazon Appstore had around 300.

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The graph illustrates the number of applications sold in 3 stores in thousands, during the period between 2010 and 2014.

Overall, iOS App Stor rose up as the most selling store for four years, (2010, 2011, 2012, 2013), though the other two stores wre going up as well. In 2014, Google Play Amazon exceed the number of sold apps by iOS App Store, reaching 1300 thousands sold app.

Furthermore, sold apps by Appstore slightly went up during the period, starting from nearly 30 thousands to peak at 300 thousands, by 2014. Whereas, the number of sold apps by Google Play Amazon was noticeably going up, starting from nearly 50 thousands sold app to reach eventually its highest number which is 1300 thousands, by 2014.

Moreover, the number of apps sold by iOS App Stor kept increaing during all the period to reach its peak at 1200 thousands sold app, by 2014.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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thousands: 7

number: 5

during: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the overall trend and some specific data points. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For example, it incorrectly states that Google Play Amazon exceeded iOS App Store in 2014, while the data shows they were close but iOS still had a higher number. The report also mislabels 'Google Play Amazon' as a single entity and omits the Amazon Appstore's data for 2010. The language contains errors ('wre', 'Stor', 'increaing') and some unclear phrasing. To improve, ensure accurate data interpretation, use correct store names, and proofread for grammatical errors. Focus on clearly comparing the three stores across the years.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview paragraph. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes unclear, and there are lapses in cohesion. For example, the phrase 'Google Play Amazon exceed the number of sold apps by iOS App Store' is confusing and disrupts the flow. The use of cohesive devices like 'Furthermore' and 'Moreover' is present but not always effective in linking ideas smoothly. To improve, focus on clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph has a single main idea. Use a wider range of linking words and phrases to show relationships between data points more precisely.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but limited and repetitive. There are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'most selling store', 'sold apps', and 'noticeably going up'. The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'surge', 'plummet', 'outstrip', 'overtake'). Additionally, the names of the stores are sometimes incorrectly combined (e.g., 'Google Play Amazon') or misspelled ('App Stor'). To improve, practice using synonyms for common words like 'increase' and 'decrease', and ensure correct terminology for the items in the chart. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement issues ('iOS App Stor rose up'), incorrect verb forms ('wre going up'), and missing articles ('the most selling store'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. Punctuation is also inconsistent, such as the misplaced comma in '2010, 2011, 2012, 2013'. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Practice constructing more complex sentences using subordinate clauses and relative clauses to add variety and precision.

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