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Band 6+: The chart below shows the number of immigrants to Germany by region in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart titled 'The number of immigrants to Germany in 2000 and 2010', with the vertical axis representing millions. Immigrant numbers for 2000 were: Oceania 16 million, Europe 30 million, Africa 6 million, America 23 million, East Asia 15 million, and South Asia 5.5 million. For 2010, the numbers were: Oceania 23 million, Europe 25 million, Africa 7.5 million, America 13 million, East Asia 24 million, and South Asia 5 million.

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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of immigrants to Germany by six region such as Oceania, Europe, Africa, America, East Asia, and South Asia in 2000 and 2010. Units measured in millions.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that Oceania, Africa, and East Asia showed an upward trends, while Europe, America, and South Asia showed a downward trends. In contrast, Europa was the highest immigration and reached a peak.

As is presented in the chart, Oceanic stood at nearly 16 million in 2000, while Africa and East Asia were nearly 6 million and 15 million, respectively. In 2010, these figures dramatically increased, such as Oceania increased to over 20 million, Africa showed minimum fluctuated, which rose to 7 million, and East Asia accounted for nearly 24 million.

In 2000, Europa amounted to 30 million, and the figure dropped by 5 million in 2010. America was nearly 23 million in 2000, and it decreased to 13 million in 2010. Lastly, South Asia amounted to over 5 million in 2000 to exactly 5 million in 2010.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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million: 11

africa: 4

nearly: 4

oceania: 3

america: 3

south: 3

showed: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons between the two years. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in data interpretation (e.g., 'Oceanic' instead of 'Oceania', 'Europa' instead of 'Europe') and minor omissions (e.g., the exact figures for some regions are slightly off). The report could be improved by ensuring consistent terminology and more precise data reporting. Additionally, the overview could be more concise and focused on key trends without minor errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview paragraph, and detailed paragraphs. The message is generally easy to follow. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the use of 'In contrast' which is not entirely accurate for the comparison made, and the phrase 'As is presented in the chart' could be more smoothly integrated. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more skilfully managed to separate the description of increases and decreases more clearly. To improve, ensure that linking words and phrases are used precisely to guide the reader through comparisons and trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at variation (e.g., 'dramatically increased', 'minimum fluctuated', 'accounted for'). However, there are several inaccuracies and unnatural choices, such as 'proportion' (the chart shows numbers, not proportions), 'Europa' (should be 'Europe'), 'Oceanic' (should be 'Oceania'), and 'minimum fluctuated' (which is unclear). The range of vocabulary is somewhat limited, and there is repetition of 'nearly' and 'million'. To improve, focus on using precise and natural vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'rose', 'declined', 'remained stable') and ensure correct spelling of region names.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. For example, 'showed an upward trends' should be 'showed an upward trend' or 'upward trends', 'Europa was the highest immigration' is ungrammatical (should be 'Europe had the highest number of immigrants'), and 'Oceanic stood at nearly 16 million' uses an incorrect adjective form. Punctuation is mostly correct, but the overall accuracy is inconsistent. To improve, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of singular/plural nouns, and ensure that sentences are grammatically complete and clear.

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