Band 4+: The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in somewhere town from 2012 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The report identifies some overall trends but contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data to support the claims. The description of the data is not always accurate, and the report could benefit from more precise use of numbers and comparative language. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using specific figures, and making clear comparisons between the different modes of transport. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report presents a basic overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The 'Overall' paragraph attempts to summarize but lacks specific details and clear connections between the observations. The subsequent paragraphs contain fragmented ideas. The conclusion is very repetitive and doesn't add any new insights. To improve coherence, focus on creating a clearer structure with well-defined paragraphs, each addressing a specific aspect of the data. Use transition words to link ideas and ensure a logical progression of information. Avoid repetition in the conclusion and instead, offer a concise summary of the key trends.

The vocabulary used is quite basic and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the trends in the graph. There is over-reliance on words like 'amount,' 'difference,' 'stable,' 'rise,' and 'drop.' To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, such as 'fluctuations,' 'growth,' 'decline,' 'peak,' 'plateau,' 'consistent,' 'significant,' 'marginal,' etc. Use more precise language to describe the quantities and changes observed in the graph. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. For example, 'the tram has had the biggest difference from it being the least used public transport option to the most' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Similarly, 'the train had the sharpest drop from 2012 to 2013 and then slowly rising until 2015' could be phrased more accurately. The sentence 'The tram had the mot significant rise with it starting with just around 23,000 and finishing off with a little under 100,000' contains a spelling error ('mot' instead of 'most') and an inaccurate number (the graph shows the tram finishing at approximately 35,000). To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using correct sentence structures, verb tenses, and subject-verb agreement. Proofread carefully to eliminate spelling errors and ensure that the data cited is accurate.