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Band 4+: The chart below shows the number of people participating in different recreational activities at a community center in Sydney, Australia, over the period from 2019 to 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays participant numbers for four activities from 2019 to 2023: Dance Classes start at 50, dip slightly to 45, rise to about 55 in 2021, and continue upwards to 70; Yoga Classes begin at 45, increase to 50 in 2020, maintain this till 2021, ascend to 55 in 2022 followed by slight growth to 60; Art Workshops' attendees number begins at approximately 35, slightly increase to roughly 37 in 2020, 40 in 2021, climb to 42 in 2022, and peak at near 45 in 2023; Chess Club starts at 20, gradually rises to around 22 in 2020, increases to around 25 in 2021, ascends to about 28 in 2022, and ultimately approaches 30 by 2023.

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all that line graph shows the number of participants in four different activities like dance classes, yoga classes, art workshops and chess club at a community center in Sydney, Australia

all of those activities successfully increase the participation on the side of dance classes and yoga attract more participant than the other 2. yoga classes, art workshops and chess club show a steady growth meanwhile dance classes show a fluctuate growth and their lowest almost reach 40 and the highest

reach more than 60.

although art workshops and chess club have a slower growth than the other but they actually have significant increase number for example art workshops gain 20 participant from 2019 to 2023 and so do chess club that increase more than 20 participant within 4 years.

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classes: 5

workshops: 4

chess: 4

dance: 3

increase: 3

participant: 3

growth: 3

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The report identifies some main features and makes some comparisons, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The language is simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on providing more specific data and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. Also, ensure that all data cited is accurate. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report lacks a clear structure and organization. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The introduction is not well-defined, and the overview of the main trends is missing. The report also lacks clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult for the reader to follow the argument. To improve coherence and cohesion, you should focus on organizing your ideas into clear paragraphs, using transition words and phrases to connect your ideas, and providing a clear overview of the main trends in the introduction.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary. The vocabulary used is not always accurate or appropriate for the task. To improve your lexical resource, you should focus on learning new vocabulary related to the topic of the task, and practice using this vocabulary in your writing.

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, including errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. These errors make it difficult to understand the meaning of the report. To improve your grammatical range and accuracy, you should focus on learning the rules of English grammar, and practice using these rules in your writing.

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