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Band 4+: The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

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The image shows a bar chart of museum visitors from 1997 to 2012, with totals: adult (300,100; 302,200; 400,500; 380,000), under 15 (120,00; 110,00; 87,000; 82,300), and special exhibition (28,000; 29,200; 37,700; 42,000), overall (448,100; 441,200; 525,200; 504,300).

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The chart illustrate the numbers of many types of visitors to a museum from the year 1997 to 2012. Overall, as can be seen that adult visitors is recorded the highest while, the special Exhibition visitors had the lowest.

To begin with that in 2007, the total of visitors was the largest were the adult visitors 400,500 whereas, the special exhibition visitors 37,700. Special exhibition vistitors has increase dramaticaly from 29,200 to 42,000 between 2002 and 2012.

However, at the end of the period visitors aged under fiften was noticable a very significant drop that was 120,000 in 1997 then 82,300 in 2012 but compeares with the special exhibition visitors is considered a higher. In the year 2012 the total of the visitors to museum has declined around 21,000.

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The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing visitor types, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the data for adult visitors in 1997 and 2002 is not mentioned, and the overall totals are not fully utilized. The description of the 'under 15' category shows a decline, which is relevant, but the comparison with special exhibition visitors could be clearer. The report would benefit from a more structured overview, accurate data presentation, and better grammatical control to improve clarity and coherence. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and some comparisons, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The paragraphing could be more logical, and the use of cohesive devices is sometimes inaccurate or overused (e.g., 'To begin with that', 'However'). To improve, focus on organizing the information more clearly, perhaps by dedicating one paragraph to the main trends and another to specific comparisons. Use a wider range of linking words and phrases more naturally, and ensure each sentence connects smoothly to the next.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with some inaccuracies (e.g., 'illustrate', 'dramaticaly', 'noticable', 'compeares'). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language, but it is not always appropriate or precise. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increase', 'decline', 'peak', 'fluctuate') and use more specific terms for comparisons. Also, pay attention to word forms and spelling to enhance accuracy.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'chart illustrate', 'visitors is recorded'), incorrect verb tenses, and problems with sentence structure. Punctuation is also inconsistent, with commas and periods used incorrectly. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex) and ensure subject-verb agreement. Review basic punctuation rules and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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