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Band 4+: The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts for the years 2015 and 2020, each divided into five sections with respective percentages. In 2015: Under 21 - 14%, 21 - 30 - 23%, 31 - 40 - 21%, 41 - 50 - 19%, Over 50 - 23%; and in 2020: Under 21 - 12%, 21 - 30 - 33%, 31 - 40 - 11%, 41 - 50 - 28%, Over 50 - 16%.

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The pie charts illustrate the age of people employed in the UK public sector in the year 2015 and 2020. Over all, 21 to 30 and over 50s age group were highest percentage in the year 2015 while in 2020 only 21-30 age group was highest percentages

To begin with, in year 2015, 14% younger people have mployed while these ratio was dropped 2% in year 2020. In contrast, the ratio of 21s-30s age of people were significantly increased to 23 to 33% in first year to following five years. However, the middle age group of communies were work 21% in the year 2015 but it drastically dropped by 10% in the year 2020.

In addition, the age group of 41 to 50 were more employed 28% in year 2020 it were about 6% more than year 2015.At last but not the least were over 50s age group and there ratio were went down to year 2015 to year 2020. In first year it was 23% but in year 2020 it was only 16%. |

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