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Band 4+: The chart below shows the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

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The image is a bar graph showing the percentage of total world resources and consumption of oil by region. The Middle East has the highest percentage of resources at 56.52% but only 6.15% consumption. The United States has the highest consumption at 25.48% with only 1.85% of resources. Other regions' resource and consumption percentages are as follows: Canada (14.84%, 2.48%), Central and South America (6.70%, 8.12%), Eastern Europe (6.55%, 6.58%), Africa (6.65%, 3.35%), Asia (26.21%, 2.89%), Western Europe (19.24%, 1.47%), Australia and New Zealand (1.31%, 0.30%), and Other (2.52%, 1.05%).

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Two charts give data about proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different parts of the word, together with the information about certain proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

Overall, the highest percentage of held oil recourses held is sown to be in Middle East, by 56.52%. Asia and United States both are almost the same in percentage of total world annual consumption, with a little privalage of about 1.5% by United States. in comperison, other countries are less in percentage of oil resources and oild consumptions.

It is clear to see that the leader of helding oil resources between other countries is Middle east, while the percentage of use is rescpectevly 6.15%. Canada is the second in percentage of oil recources with 14.84% and 2.48% in consumotion. Eastern Europe, Africa and America are close to each other in helding of oil resources, less than 9% each of them, whlie in oil consumption Africa have a big differnce by almost 3%.

Asia, US and Western Europe are low in percentage of oil recoursec that less than 2%, while the percentage of oil consumption are more higher compared to other countries, Finally, Australia and New Zeland are less in both helding and consumption, while other countries are 1.5% in helding and 2.52% in conumtion of oil.

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percentage: 7

other: 5

resources: 4

consumption: 4

countries: 4

helding: 4

about: 3

while: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features of the chart, such as the Middle East's high resource share and the US's high consumption. However, there are several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data (e.g., Asia's resource percentage is misstated, and the final sentence contains incorrect figures). The overall structure is present, but the writing contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data reporting, clearer organization, and proofreading for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by overall trends and then specific regions, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear references and abrupt transitions. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'in comperison', 'Finally'), and the paragraphing is not effectively managed. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (e.g., resources vs. consumption). Also, use a range of linking words and referencing to create a smoother, more logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'recourses', 'helding', 'privalage', 'comperison', 'rescpectevly', 'consumotion', 'whlie', 'differnce', 'conumtion') that hinder clarity. There is some attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'proportions', 'percentage', 'held'), but the range is narrow and often inaccurate. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'account for', 'constitute', 'represent', 'approximately', 'significantly higher/lower') and practice spelling common terms. Use precise and varied language to avoid repetition and enhance precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect word forms, and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the highest percentage of held oil recourses held is sown to be', 'the leader of helding oil resources'). Punctuation is often missing or misused, and sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures and then incorporate more complex forms (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) with accuracy. Proofread carefully to eliminate errors in verb tense, pluralization, and prepositions. Practice writing clear, grammatically correct sentences to enhance overall clarity.

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