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Band 5+: The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.

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The image displays a horizontal bar graph titled "Young people's expectations for change" with five categories: Communication between people, Quality of food, Quality of water, Quality of air in cities, Health; each category has two bars representing percentages of "will improve" and "get worse". Communication between people: will improve 54%, get worse 46%. Quality of food: will improve 49%, get worse 51%. Quality of water: will improve 40%, get worse 60%. Quality of air in cities: will improve 23%, get worse 70%. Health: will improve 42%, get worse 58%. The percentage scale ranges from 0% to 100%.

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The bar chart presents the expectation for change in five categories including communication between people, quality of food, water, air in cities and health in the next 20 years by young people in a European, measuring in percentage.

Overall, the percentage of young people’s expectations for change in communication is the only figure has the positive view over negative view. In contrast, most people believe that others are going to get worse.

The percentage of young people’s expectation for change in the quality of environment is lower than other categories. With 23 percent of individuals believe that the air will be better in the future while 70 percent of those who think it will get worse. The proportion of people who expect the quality of water will develop is higher than air, accounted for 40 percent. And those who think different is 60 percent.

In contrast, there are many people believe that communication between people will be improved, with 54 percent, the highest figure for positive view. And 46 percent of people think it will get worse. The percentage of young people’s expectation for change in quality of food and health are quite the same, with 49 and 42 percent of people hope it will improve while 51 and 58 percent of individuals think it could not be better.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 8

percent: 7

change: 4

quality: 4

young: 4

think: 4

expectation: 3

communication: 3

percentage: 3

people's: 3

believe: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between the categories. The overview is clear, highlighting the distinction between the one category with a positive outlook and the others. To improve, ensure more precise grouping of data and refine grammatical accuracy, particularly regarding sentence structure and word choice (e.g., 'those who think different' should be 'those who think differently'). Additionally, try to avoid repetitive phrasing when presenting percentages to enhance the flow of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. The use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive or used incorrectly (e.g., starting sentences with 'And'). To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words and ensuring that each sentence flows naturally into the next to create a smoother reading experience.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but it lacks the sophistication and precision required for higher bands. There is some repetition of words like 'percentage' and 'people'. Additionally, some word choices are imprecise (e.g., 'the quality of environment' to describe air and water, or 'think different' instead of 'think otherwise'). Aim to use more varied synonyms for 'show', 'increase', 'decrease', and 'proportion', and ensure that collocations are natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the clarity of the message. There are issues with sentence structure (e.g., 'the only figure has the positive view'), subject-verb agreement, and fragment sentences (e.g., 'With 23 percent of individuals believe...'). There is also a lack of complex sentence structures used accurately. To improve, practice combining short, simple sentences into complex ones using relative clauses (who, which, that) and subordinating conjunctions, while paying close attention to basic syntax.

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