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Band 4+: The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a horizontal bar chart showing travel spending in 2014 for the top ten countries: China leads with approximately 120 billion USD, followed by the United States at 85 billion USD, Germany at nearly 80 billion USD, the United Kingdom at 55 billion USD, Singapore at 37 billion USD, South Korea at 25 billion USD, Hong Kong at 24 billion USD, India at 23 billion USD, Malaysia at 21 billion USD, and Taiwan at 12 billion USD.

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THE CHART ILLUSTARTES THE SPENDING OF TOP COUNTRIES ON TRAVEL IN THE SAME YEAR (2014).

OVERALL, ALL THE COUNTRIES SPEND MONEY BUT SOME PAY HUGE AMOUNT SOME PAY MINIMAL AMOUNT. CHINA,US AND GERMANY SHOWS THE LARGE NUMBER OF AMOUNT SPENDING ON TRAVEL THEN OTHER COUNTRIES WHILE OTHER EXPAND LESS IN 2014 AND SOME USE FEWER DOLLARS ON TRAVELLING BETWEEN 10 TO 20 US DOLLARS.

START WITH CHINA,IT SPEND MORE ABOVE HUNDRED BILLION USD ON TRAVEL ( A NOTICABLE AMOUNT) WHILE US USE LESS THAN CHINA MORE ABOVE 80 BILLION USD WHICH IS ALSO A BIG AMOUNT.

WHILE CONSIDERING THE GERMANY,IT ALMOST PAY SAME AMOUNT AS UNITED STATE . IN CONTRAST UNITED KINGDOM PAY AROUND 60 BILLION US DOLLARS WHICH IS BELOW THAN OTHER DESCRIBED COUNTRIES.

ALTHOUGH OTHER COUNTRIES LIKE SINGHAPORE,HONG KONG AND INDIA SPEND VERY MINIMAL AMOUNT ON TRAVELLING AND THE REMAINING COUNTRIES LIKE INDIA,MALAYSIA AND TAIWAN GO DOWN IN THE CHART IN THE SAME YEAR.THEY SPEND FEWER AMOUNT ON TRAVELLING.

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countries: 5

spend: 4

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travel: 3

travelling: 3

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The report addresses the task but contains significant issues. The overview is very general and doesn't highlight key trends effectively. The body paragraphs lack specific data and accurate comparisons. The language is also quite basic and repetitive. To improve, focus on providing more precise data from the chart, making clear comparisons between countries, and using a wider range of vocabulary and sentence structures. A more structured approach with a clear overview and detailed body paragraphs would also enhance the report.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the paragraphing is not effective. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and create a smoother flow between sentences and paragraphs. For example, use transition words like 'however,' 'moreover,' 'in addition,' and 'in contrast' to show relationships between different points. Also, group similar ideas together in paragraphs to improve coherence.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is a lack of precision in word choice, and the range of vocabulary is limited. Use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more accurately and avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'spend,' try 'allocate,' 'invest,' or 'expend.' Also, use more specific adjectives and adverbs to provide more detail.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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