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Band 6+: The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a horizontal bar chart showing travel spending in 2014 for the top ten countries: China leads with approximately 120 billion USD, followed by the United States at 85 billion USD, Germany at nearly 80 billion USD, the United Kingdom at 55 billion USD, Singapore at 37 billion USD, South Korea at 25 billion USD, Hong Kong at 24 billion USD, India at 23 billion USD, Malaysia at 21 billion USD, and Taiwan at 12 billion USD.

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The diagram illustrates the top ten countries with the largest expenditure on journeys in 2014.

Overall, the China remained the major driver of spending in that country over the period, with other determinants trailing distantly behind in terms of USD. Taiwan, on the other hand, represented the lowest expensed money in terms of USD, while the USA and Germany illustrated equal figures; similarly, South Korea and Hong Kong showed comparable expenses. Placing variable USD for the remaining figures.

More specifically, in 2014 the vast majority of money was spent in China, making up roughly 110 billion USD. Following the same way behind were the USA and Germany, each accounted for close to 82 billion USD. Likewise, South korea and Hong Kong made up comparable expenses in trems of proportion ,each making up roughly 20 billion USD.

Regarding the remaining countries, the United Kingdom represented almost 55 billion USD, and Singapore made up approximately 33 billion USD over the period. Finally, the remaining Taiwan represented smallest spent money on traveling, making up approximately 10%. India and Malaysia attracted only roughly 13% and 17%, respectively.

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The report addresses the task by presenting the main features of the chart and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data (e.g., China's spending is stated as 110 billion instead of 120, USA and Germany are said to be equal at 82 billion, and percentages are used for India and Malaysia without clear context). The structure is generally clear, but some phrases are awkward or unclear (e.g., 'the China remained the major driver of spending in that country', 'Placing variable USD for the remaining figures'). To improve, ensure data is reported accurately and consistently, avoid vague or confusing statements, and use precise language to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the China remained the major driver of spending in that country' and 'Placing variable USD for the remaining figures'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, which affects the overall coherence. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a range of linking words and referencing techniques accurately.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the topic (e.g., 'expenditure', 'trailing distantly', 'comparable expenses'). However, there are instances of imprecise word choices and awkward collocations (e.g., 'expensed money', 'Placing variable USD', 'in trems of proportion'). The range of vocabulary is adequate but not fully flexible or sophisticated. To improve, use more precise and natural expressions, and avoid literal translations or informal phrases.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'the China' is incorrect (article misuse), 'Following the same way behind' is awkward, and there are missing commas and incorrect capitalization ('South korea'). The sentence 'Placing variable USD for the remaining figures' is incomplete and unclear. While some complex structures are attempted, they are not always controlled. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for punctuation and article usage.

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