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Band 5+: The chart below shows the whole world population in 4 countires from 1950 to 2010.

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The image presents a column graph depicting world population percentage for four countries from 1950 (dark grey), 2000 (grey) to 2050 projections (light grey): India slightly under 15% (1950), exceeds 20% (2000), projects to 25% (2050); China over 20% (1950), nearly equals India at 20% (2000), estimates drop to 15% (2050); USA just over 5% (1950), under 5% (2000), declines further to 5% (2050); Japan slightly under 5% (1950), similar in 2000, decreases to 3% by 2050. Total world population estimate surpasses 6 billion (6B) in 2000.

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The bar chart provides information about population in four different countries from 1950 to 2000, with anticipated for 2050

Overall the most striking aspect shown in this figure is that the number of population in China was the highest in 1950 whereas, India has contributed the second highest population. On the other hand, the number of population in Japan had become lowest contribution, the period between 1950 to 2050.

To begin with, in 1950,the figure for world population in China was almost above 25%. Whereas India contributed only 15% the proportion of world population. In 2000 between India and China they contributed in world population 18% and almost 25%. Forecast India is the highest than China.

However, 1950 Japan and USA contributed approximately 10% and 5% both was the lowest in different four countries. In 2000 between USA and Japan again USA dominated world population then Japan buy contributing 8% and 4% respectively. In forecast 2050 they fredicted Japan will contribute around 3% that was the lowest in four different countries.

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population: 8

japan: 5

india: 4

contributed: 4

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china: 3

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lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the population percentages for the four countries across the given time periods, and it includes an overall statement. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., China's 1950 figure is stated as 'above 25%' instead of 'over 20%', and the 2000 figures for India and China are given as 18% and 25% instead of approximately 20% each). Additionally, some descriptions are unclear or contain grammatical errors (e.g., 'the number of population in Japan had become lowest contribution', 'they fredicted'). To improve, ensure data is reported accurately and use clearer, more precise language. Also, avoid minor omissions such as not mentioning the total world population estimate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'On the other hand' is used incorrectly). Paragraphing is present but not always logical, and the second paragraph mixes data for different years without clear organization. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific time period or comparison, and use a wider range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There is some repetition (e.g., 'contributed', 'population') and misuse of words (e.g., 'fredicted' for 'predicted', 'buy' for 'by'). The report would benefit from more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'projected to', 'estimated to', and 'slightly under/over'. Avoid informal or incorrect terms and ensure word choice is appropriate for an academic report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, and sentence structure (e.g., 'the number of population in China was the highest' should be 'the population of China was the highest'). Some sentences are incomplete or run-on. To improve, focus on writing clear, grammatically correct sentences, use a variety of complex structures, and proofread carefully for punctuation and spelling errors.

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