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Band 5+: The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK beetween 1990 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK, showing data for 1990 and 2000 respectively: Bicycle (~3, ~1), Motorbike (~4, ~2), Air (~1, ~4), Bus (40, ~42), Rail (~35, ~37), and Total (100, 110).

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The given bar chart shows path traveled each individual each week ( in kilometres) with regard to 5 options of UK transports in the period of 1990 and 2000.

Firstly, the chart depicts significant statistics of traveled distances by rail and bus, that were an outliers compared to others reaching approximately 40 kilometres per week during the 1990 to 2000. Secondly, the rest transports such as air, motorbike and bicycle lagged far behind the leading transports. Thirdly it is clearly considerable to see that the distances made by air, bus and rail users highly rised in numbers by 2000 year. Furthermore, relying on the bar chart there is provided the second group of transports which shows on the contrary, weak data points which promoted by slight recession.

Overall, in the UK in the period of 1990, the total points demonstrated distance traveled which was nearly 100 kilometers and respectively, considerable growth with close to 110 kilometers by 2000.

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the graph and makes relevant comparisons. There are a few minor inaccuracies and some generalisations, but overall the response is well-organized and presents a clear overview of the data. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and avoiding overly general statements. Also, ensure that all trends and changes are accurately reflected.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. The use of 'Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Furthermore' feels a bit formulaic and doesn't always logically connect the points being made. Consider using more varied transition words and phrases to improve the flow. Paragraphing could also be improved to better group related ideas together. For example, the discussion of the 'leading transports' and the 'rest transports' could be more clearly delineated.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Some phrases are a bit awkward (e.g., 'path traveled each individual,' 'that were an outliers,' 'highly rised in numbers,' 'weak data points which promoted by slight recession'). Try to use more specific and natural-sounding language. For instance, instead of 'path traveled each individual,' you could say 'distance traveled per person.' Instead of 'weak data points which promoted by slight recession', consider 'showed a slight decrease'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Some examples include incorrect verb tenses ('distances made by air, bus and rail users highly rised'), incorrect article usage ('the chart depicts significant statistics'), and awkward sentence structures. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. Proofreading carefully for these types of errors will significantly improve the accuracy of your writing.

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