Pie Chart

Band 5+: The chart illustrates the proportion of water used for 6 products and the percentage of total income generated from these products in the same year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts from 2004: the first shows water usage percentages for six products, with vegetables using 46%, cereal 12%, lime 28%, fruits 8%, rice 3%, and dandelion 3%. The second chart shows income percentages with vegetables contributing 31%, cereal 12%, lime 8%, fruits 40%, rice 8%, and dandelion 1%.

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In this chart you can see the percentage of water that they needed to use for six kind of products, such as vegetables, cereal, lime, fruits, rise, dandelion and their income from celling them.

Overall, we can see that vegetables consume has a lot more usage of water, meanwile, rise and dandelion has the lowest percentage of water consumption. However, dandelion provides equal income with lime, wich shows us the significant benefits of growing this kind of plants.

Cereal and lime has equal water usage and the income from it. Meanwile, vegetables income decreases compared with its expense, wich is 31 percent. That is 15 percent less.

Also, as we can see from the chart, income from fruits sharply increases to 40 percent, wich shows us how benefitial to grow fruits and getting income from it

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

income: 6

water: 4

vegetables: 3

fruits: 3

dandelion: 3

percent: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key features and makes some comparisons, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks overall clarity. The organization could be improved with a clearer structure, and the language contains errors. To improve, focus on accurate data representation, clearer organization, and more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt to organize the information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The introduction is weak and lacks a clear overview. The body paragraphs present some comparisons, but these are not always logically sequenced. Transitions between sentences and ideas are often abrupt, hindering the overall coherence. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical progression of your report. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Furthermore' to connect related points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. There is a limited range of words and phrases, which affects the precision and sophistication of the report. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' try using synonyms like 'proportion' or 'share.' To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to data analysis and economic activity. Also, pay attention to the correct usage of words to avoid inaccuracies.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('consume has'), subject-verb agreement issues ('dandelion provides'), and awkward phrasing ('income from celling them'). Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Punctuation errors are also present. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice using a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) to enhance the grammatical range. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in grammar and punctuation.

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