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Band 8+: The chart shows information about the actual and expected figures for population in three cities, Jakarta, Sao Paulo, and Shanghai. Summarize by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar chart comparing the actual and expected population figures of three cities, Jakarta, Sao Paulo, and Shanghai, between 1990 and 2000. Jakarta's 1990 population was approximately 9 million, predicted to reach 17 million by 2000, but the actual figure was around 14 million. Shanghai's population in 1990 was about 6 million, expected to increase to 7 million by 2000, but the actual count reached approximately 10 million. Sao Paulo had a population of nearly 15 million in 1990, with a predicted growth to 18 million by 2000, but the actual population was around 17 million. The chart uses blue for 1990, brown for the 2000 prediction, and red for the 2000 actual numbers.

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The bar chart illustrates the predicted and actual population figures for Jakarta, São Paulo and Shanghai in 2000, compared with their populations in 1990.

Overall, São Paulo had the largest population, while Jakarta had the smallest. In addition, the predicted figures for 2000 were generally lower than the actual figures.

In 1990, São Paulo had approximately 17 million people, followed by Shanghai and Jakarta, with around 12 million and 9 million inhabitants, respectively. Regarding the predicted figures for 2000, Sao Paulo was expected to have approximately 21.5 million people, while Jakarta and Shanghai were both projected to have around 11 million.

Turning to the actual figures for 2000, São Paulo’s population increased to just under 25 million, surpassing the predicted figure of approximately 21.5 million. Meanwhile, Shanghai’s population rose to around 15 million, exceeding its projected figure of 11 million. Similarly, Jakarta’s population increased slightly to approximately 12 million, which was also higher than the predicted figure of 11 million.

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predicted: 5

population: 5

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jakarta: 4

paulo: 4

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shanghai: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and comparing the data across the three cities. It correctly identifies the main trends, such as the general increase in population and the fact that actual figures exceeded predictions. However, there are some inaccuracies in the specific data values (e.g., São Paulo's 1990 population, Shanghai's 1990 population, and the predicted figures for 2000), which, while not detracting from the overall structure, could be improved for precision. Additionally, the report could benefit from a more explicit comparison between the cities' growth rates or the degree to which actual figures deviated from predictions. Overall, the response is well-organized and covers the main features, but minor data errors and a slightly limited comparative analysis prevent it from achieving a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is exceptionally well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively highlights the main trends. The body paragraphs are logically structured, first presenting the 1990 data and predictions, then the actual 2000 figures, with smooth transitions and clear referencing. Paragraphing is skilfully managed, and cohesion is achieved without being obtrusive.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is precise, varied, and used naturally. Terms such as 'illustrates', 'projected', 'surpassing', 'exceeding', and 'increased slightly' demonstrate a wide range of appropriate lexical items. The report avoids repetition and shows sophisticated control of language, making it fully appropriate for a high band score. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Sentences are varied in structure, and punctuation is accurate throughout. There are no noticeable errors, and the grammar is used correctly and appropriately, contributing to the overall clarity and professionalism of the report.

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