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Band 6+: The chart shows the proportion of seats an airline was able to fill at three time points. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The image shows a bar chart for Wright Brothers Airways with Passenger Load Factor (%) on the y-axis and Fare Class on the x-axis. Four fare classes (Economy, Premium Economy, Business, First) are represented, with three bars per class corresponding to years 2005, 2010, and 2015. Year percentage data provided are as follows: Economy - 2005: ~82%, 2010: ~83%, 2015: ~85%; Premium Economy - 2005: ~78%, 2010: ~83%, 2015: ~88%; Business - 2005: ~75%, 2010: ~80%, 2015: ~60%; First - 2005: ~80%, 2010: ~85%, 2015: ~90%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of seats an airline occupied by passengers in three different years: 2005, 2010, and 2015.

Overall, business seats had the largest proportion at the beginning of the period, whereas it was surpassed by premuim economy by the end of the period Aditionally, the percentage of economy, premium economy and first seats filled by people experienced a significant rise throughout the given years, while the opposite was true for business seats.

Regarding the most popular categories, premium economy seats accounted for 85% in 2005. After having a gradual growth in 2010, it leveled off at 95% by 2015. Economy seats remained stable at 80% between 2005 and 2010. Then, it increased moderately to 90% by 2015.

Turning to other categories, business seats started at 90% in 2005. However, a dive was seen in the figure, reaching the lowest point of 65% by 2010. After this, it showed a noticeable climb to 75% in 2015. The percentage of first seats fillid by passengers stayed umchanged at 80% from 2005 to 2010, after which it went up silghtly by 5% in 2015.

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seats: 7

economy: 5

percentage: 3

business: 3

after: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies the main trends, such as the general increase in most categories and the decline in business class. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data reported compared to the visual description provided. For example, the report claims premium economy started at 85% and reached 95%, whereas the description suggests a different trajectory. Additionally, the description of business class shows a decline in 2015, while the report describes a 'noticeable climb.' To improve, ensure that the data extracted from the chart is reported accurately and that the trends described align strictly with the visual evidence. While the structure is appropriate, the factual inconsistencies regarding the figures detract from the overall task achievement.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, there are issues with punctuation and sentence connectivity. For example, there is a missing period before 'Aditionally', and some transitions could be smoother. To improve, ensure that every sentence is properly punctuated to avoid run-on thoughts and use a wider variety of cohesive devices to link ideas more naturally.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing trends (e.g., 'gradual growth', 'leveled off', 'noticeable climb'), but there are several spelling errors such as 'premuim', 'Aditionally', 'fillid', 'umchanged', and 'silghtly'. These errors, while not preventing understanding, detract from the professional quality of the report. Aim for higher precision in word choice and double-check spelling to ensure accuracy. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are grammatical inaccuracies, such as 'the percentage of economy, premium economy and first seats filled by people experienced a significant rise' (subject-verb agreement/plurality nuances) and 'The percentage of first seats fillid by passengers stayed umchanged'. There are also issues with tense consistency and sentence construction. Focus on refining your use of articles and ensuring that complex sentences are grammatically sound.

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