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Band 6+: The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image provides data for the Little Chalfont Library across three charts. A 2016 pie chart on the age of library members indicates that Adults 18-64 constituted 51%, Children 22%, Young adults 13-17 15%, and Adults 65 and over 12%. A table details the total loans by category in 2016: Children's fiction and Adult fiction both at 38%, Adult non-fiction at 13%, Children's non-fiction at 6%, Young adults at 2%, Adult audio books at 2%, and Children's DVDs at 1%. A bar chart shows the total number of loans from 2007 to 2016, with approximate values as follows: 2007 (15,500), 2008 (18,500), 2009 (19,000), 2010 (20,500), 2011 (21,000), 2012 (20,500), 2013 (19,500), 2014 (20,500), 2015 (21,000), and 2016 (21,500).

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The chart shows the information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. The information includes age of library members, the total loans by category in 2007 until 2016.

All-round, the total numbers of annual loans showed a gradual increase. First of all, the number of loans started with a bit more than 15000 in 2007, then it increased to around 21000 in 2011. But in the next two years, the data occurred a slight drop, reaching a bit lower than 20000 in 2013.

Apart from that, the data is slowly improving of loans with a bit more than 22000 again in 2014 to 2016. In 2016 ,children’s fiction and adult fiction were the highest percentages, with 38% each. The second highest percentage was adult non-fiction, which contributed 13% of total loans.The remaining four categories with total loans by category, all not exceeding 20%, are children non-fiction, children DVDs,Young adults and adult audio books.

Finally, the Little Chalfont Library as for the age of library members, there were four groups in 2016. The age of library members by the highest percentages was 18-64, with 51%. The second highest percentage was children,which contributed 22% of total loans. The third highest percentage was young adults 13-17, which contributed 15% of total loans. The age of library members by the lowest percentages was adults 65 and over, which contributed 12% of total loans.

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loans: 8

total: 7

library: 6

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percentage: 3

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adults: 3

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The report covers the main features of all three charts and makes some comparisons. The overall trend in loans is described, and the key data for the pie chart and table are presented. However, there are some inaccuracies in the bar chart data (e.g., stating 'a bit more than 22000' for 2014-2016, while the actual values are around 20,500-21,500) and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the data occurred a slight drop', 'the data is slowly improving'). To improve, ensure data is reported accurately and use more precise language. Additionally, the report could be better organized by clearly separating the description of each chart and using more varied vocabulary for trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, the phrase 'the data occurred a slight drop' is not idiomatic, and the transition between the bar chart and the pie chart/table could be smoother. The paragraphing is adequate, but the final paragraph is overly detailed and repetitive. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph has a distinct focus. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and avoid abrupt shifts.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some inaccuracies and limited range. For instance, 'All-round' is not the correct term; 'Overall' would be better. Also, 'the data occurred' is incorrect; 'the data showed' or 'there was' would be more natural. The report uses basic vocabulary like 'highest percentages' and 'contributed' repeatedly. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms, such as 'accounted for', 'represented', 'peaked', 'dipped', etc. Also, avoid informal or incorrect expressions like 'a bit more than' in formal writing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures. For example, 'the data occurred a slight drop' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'there was a slight drop' or 'the data showed a slight drop'. Also, 'the data is slowly improving of loans' is not grammatical; it should be 'the number of loans slowly improved'. There are also punctuation issues, such as missing spaces after commas. The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple sentences. To improve, use a variety of complex and compound sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions. Proofread to eliminate basic errors.

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