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Band 4+: The charts below give information about the employment of graduates who completed a Master's degree in Business Administration (MBA) at one university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Employment of MBA graduates, 2012

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The image provides two pie charts regarding MBA graduates' 2012 employment. The first chart categorizes employment area: Industry 44%, Finance 25%, Consultancy 18%, Public sector 7%, Other 6%. The second chart details work types: Marketing/Sales 19%, Project management 17%, General management 16%, Corporate planning 10%, Consultancy 9%, Financial management 23%, Business development 21%.

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The graph illustrate statistic about the employment of graduates in one university which finished a Master’s degree in Business Administration (MBA) in 2012

Overall, The largest employment area percent is occupied by industry almost half , made it the most common area. Finance section stood out with second higher figure among others. In addition financial management business development and marketing Sales followed similar proportion in Type of work done

Turning into detail for first pie chart the immense percentages splited out to Finance and Industry (25% , 44%) Consultancy was occupied 18% Moreover Public sector and Other the remaining percentages were divided almost equally (7% , 6%)

Financial management owned (23%) slightly more percentage than business development But it revearse true for Project management , It was the least popular work with 6% in type of work done Corporate planning stood with 10%.

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Band 4+: The charts below give information about the employment of graduates who completed a Master's degree in Business Administration (MBA) at one university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Employment of MBA graduates, 2012

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