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Band 5+: The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Pie charts)

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The image presents two pie charts comparing the energy production from different resources in a country for the years 1985 and 2003. For 1985: 52% from oil, 22% from natural gas, 13% from coal, 8% from nuclear, 4% from hydro, and 1% from other renewable sources. For 2003: 39% from oil, 23% from natural gas, 22% from coal, 8% from nuclear, 4% from hydro, and 4% from other renewable sources.

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The pie charts illustrate the energy that came from different proportion of resources such as oil, coal, natural gas that was produced in country in 1985 and 2003.

In 1985, 52% of resources that use to produce energy was oil, which was the highest percentage among all resources, followed by nuclear with 22% continue with natural gas that have 13% the rest were coal with 8%, hydro with 4% and renewable with 1%

In 2003, 39% of resources that use to produce energy was oil, which was the highest percentage among all resources, followed by natural gas with 23% continue with coal that have 22% the rest were nuclear with 8%, hydro with 4% and renewable with 4%

In conclusion, coal that largest increase following by natural gas and renewable. In the other hand nuclear is the greatest drop following by oil. Except for oil that have same percentage both 1985 and 2003.

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resources: 5

natural: 4

energy: 3

percentage: 3

nuclear: 3

renewable: 3

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The report identifies some key features and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is somewhat clear, but the language contains errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, ensuring correct percentages, and using more precise language to describe changes and trends. Also, avoid abrupt changes in tense.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is somewhat organized, but the flow of information could be improved. The sentences are not always logically connected, and the paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. The conclusion feels rushed and lacks a clear connection to the data presented in the body paragraphs. To improve coherence, use transition words and phrases to link ideas and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data. Also, make sure the conclusion summarizes the main trends and provides a clear overview of the changes observed.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is a limited range of words and phrases, which affects the clarity and precision of the report. To enhance lexical resource, try to use synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to energy production and changes over time. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'resources,' consider using terms like 'energy sources,' 'fuel types,' or 'power generation methods.' Also, vary the language used to describe increases and decreases, such as 'rose,' 'declined,' 'increased significantly,' or 'experienced a slight drop.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors make it difficult to understand the information clearly. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures and ensuring that each sentence is grammatically correct. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Review and correct any errors before submitting the report.

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