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The image presents two sets of data: a pie chart and a bar graph from 2014. The pie chart shows global adult attitudes towards exercise with 38% wanting to exercise more and 62% already enjoying exercise. The bar graph categorizes types of exercise done regularly by age groups: Age 18-34 - Fitness classes (52%), Yoga (22%), Dance classes (18%), Swimming (25%), Walking (42%), Cycling (17%); Age 35-54 - Fitness classes (44%), Yoga (18%), Dance classes (14%), Swimming (20%), Walking (47%), Cycling (14%); Age 55+ - Fitness classes (35%), Yoga (12%), Dance classes (10%), Swimming (15%), Walking (65%), Cycling (9%).

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The provided pie chart illustrates, the adults worldwide to exercise while bar chart illustrates, the exercise types and different age grops in 2014.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is evident that the most popular exercise age group was age 18-34. However many people done regularly exercise type ware walking and fitness classes.

Looking at more details, the old people highest exercise was alredy enjoy below 40%. Furthermore the elders least exercise was not interested at 28%, the would like to exercise worldwide adults below 38%.

According to the provided data, the age 18-34 group, most popular fitness clasess near the 50%, the second most popular cycling at 30%, in addition yoga was 20%, then slightly increased dance classess and swiming below more than 20%. On the other age group was age 35-54, then dace classess and swiming showed remained stable at 10%. The age 55+ group, most popular exercise type was walking arround 60%, and least was cycling less than 5% end of the time period.

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