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Band 4+: The charts below show the density of people in 2003, and the change of population from 2003 to 2005.

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The image consists of two graphs: the first graph, titled "The number of people per square km in 6 countries in 2003," shows the population density in six countries, with Australia at 2, Canada at 3, Japan at 338, Italy at 191, Sweden at 20, and the United Kingdom at 243 people per square km. The second graph, titled "The percentage change in population from 2003 to 2005," shows changes in population size over two years. Australia has an increase of 1.42%, Canada 1.06%, Japan 0.35%, Italy 0.11%, Sweden -0.1%, and the United Kingdom 0.25%.

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The Bar chart depicts the number of people per square km in the year 2003 & their pre cent variation in population between 2003 to 2005.

The data shows a fluctuation in the number & percentage of population in year 2003 which goes till 2005 has raised in countries like Australia & Canada whereas country like Sweden went to a sudden downfall in population from 2003-2005 with that countries like Japan, United Kingdom & Italy has shown a decline for the same.

The bar graph shows a growth in the population of japan (338sq.km) which was highest by the year 2003 whereas countries like Canada, Australia, & Sweden were showing decline in the population which was around 3sq.km, 3sq.km, & 20sq.km in 2003 while countries like U.K., Italy have an increased of 243sq.km, 191sq.km in the same year.

However, the bar chart shows a drastically change in population in countries like Australia & Canada with a progressed of 1.42 % & 1.06% while countries like Japan, U.K., Italy has seen a less change in population of 0.35%, 0.25%, 0.11%, with that a negative decline in Sweden which was -0.1% in population by the end of year 2005.

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population: 8

countries: 6

which: 4

shows: 3

australia: 3

canada: 3

sweden: 3

japan: 3

italy: 3

decline: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by mentioning both charts, but there are significant issues with data interpretation and accuracy. The report frequently confuses population density (people per square km) with the actual population size or the percentage change. For example, it describes density figures as if they were population counts or trends. Additionally, the overview is somewhat contradictory, stating that Japan, the UK, and Italy showed a decline, whereas the data indicates they actually experienced positive growth (albeit small). To improve, ensure a clear distinction between the two different units of measurement (density vs. percentage change) and verify that the trends described (increase vs. decrease) accurately reflect the numbers provided in the visual description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat chaotic, making it difficult for the reader to follow the logic. The use of conjunctions like 'with that' is repetitive and often used incorrectly to link ideas. To improve, you should use clear paragraphing: one for the introduction, one for the overview of main trends, and separate body paragraphs for the specific details of each chart. Avoid long, run-on sentences; instead, use a variety of cohesive devices such as 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Regarding...' to transition between points.

Lexical Resource

There is a limited range of vocabulary, and several words are used incorrectly in context. For example, 'fluctuation' is used to describe static data from 2003, and 'downfall' is an inappropriate term for a small percentage decrease in population. Additionally, there is confusion between 'population density' (people per sq km) and 'population size.' You should practice using precise academic collocations, such as 'experienced a slight decline' or 'witnessed a significant increase,' and ensure you distinguish between units of measurement (people/sq km vs. percentage). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors that impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'countries... has shown'), incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'between 2003 to 2005' should be 'between 2003 and 2005'), and improper sentence structures. Punctuation is also used inconsistently. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures (Subject + Verb + Object) and ensure that complex sentences are joined correctly using subordinating conjunctions rather than just commas.

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