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Band 6+: the charts below show the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's shares of the Japanese tourist market.

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The image contains two graphs: The first graph, "Japanese tourists traveling abroad," shows a consistent year-on-year increase in the number of Japanese tourists from 1985 to 1995: 1985 - 5 million, 1986 - 5 million, 1987 - 6 million, 1988 - 7 million, 1989 - 11 million, 1990 - 11 million, 1991 - 12 million, 1992 - 12 million, 1993 - 11 million, 1994 - 13 million, 1995 - 15 million. The second graph, "Australia's share of Japan's tourist market," displays varying percentage values for Australia's market share: 1985 - 2%, 1986 - 2%, 1987 - 4%, 1988 - 4%, 1989 - 5%, 1990 - 6%, 1991 - 7%, 1992 - 6%, 1993 - 7%, 1994 - 8%, 1995 - 6%.

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The bar graph illustrates the number of Japanese travellers who went abroad, and the line graph gives information about the percentage of tourists who were going to Australia, during the period of 1985-95.

Overall, it is clear that the number of Japanese people travelling abroad increased steadily. At the same time, Australia’s share of this market rose significantly, but with a slight decline in the middle of the period.

In 1975, the number of Japanese tourists visited abroad was approximately 5 million, whereas the figure was slightly under just over 5 million over the following five years more was a slight decrease in 1991, with the figure fell to at 11 million. By 1995, the number peaked at about 15.5 million, which marked the highest figure recorded during the period.

Similarly, Australia experienced substantial growth in the share of Japanese tourists. In 1985, Australia accounted for 2% in the market, which increased by nearly 2.9 percent in 1993. After the declining of to 4.2%, the proportion skyrocketed and reached its highest point in 1994 at just over 6%.

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number: 4

japanese: 4

million: 4

abroad: 3

tourists: 3

australia: 3

figure: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends of both graphs, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is correctly identified, and key data points are mentioned. However, the report contains several data errors (e.g., starting year mentioned as 1975, incorrect figures for 1991 and 1995, and inaccurate percentages for Australia's share). The description of Australia's share is somewhat confusing and includes incorrect values. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and clearly describe the trends with correct figures. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'slightly under just over 5 million' and ensure the report is well-structured with clear overview and detailed paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'whereas the figure was slightly under just over 5 million over the following five years more was a slight decrease in 1991' is confusing and lacks clear connection between ideas. The paragraphing is adequate, but the second body paragraph could be more logically organized, and the conclusion is missing. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that ideas are linked smoothly with appropriate cohesive devices.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased steadily', 'rose significantly', 'peaked', 'skyrocketed'), which is appropriate for the task. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the declining of to 4.2%' and 'slightly under just over 5 million'. The word 'skyrocketed' may be too informal for an academic report. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'experienced a decline', 'reached a peak') and avoid informal or exaggerated terms. Also, ensure that numerical expressions are clear and accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'the number of Japanese tourists visited abroad' should be 'the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad', and 'with the figure fell to at 11 million' is grammatically incorrect. There are also issues with articles and prepositions (e.g., 'in the market' should be 'of the market'). The report would benefit from more careful proofreading and practice in using complex sentences accurately. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of relative clauses, and proper punctuation.

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Band 6+: the charts below show the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's shares of the Japanese tourist market.

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