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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The image contains two graphs; the first graph shows the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad from 1985 to 1995, with the following data points for each year (in millions): '85=4, '86=5, '87=6, '88=7, '89=8, '90=10, '91=12, '92=14, '93=16, '94=18, '95=16. The second graph shows Australia's share of Japan's tourist market from 1985 to 1994, with the following data points for each year (percentage going to Australia): '85=3, '86=3.5, '87=4, '88=4.5, '89=5, '90=5.5, '91=6, '92=6.5, '93=6.5, '94=6.5.

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The bar and line charts compare the figure of japanese travellers visiting overseas from 1985 to 1995 and Australias presents of the japanese visitor market.

Overall, it is cleared that the number of japanese tourist travelles overseas from specific time period and Australia shows the japanese tourist market.

Additionally, in 1985 about five million tourist travelled overseas which was the lowest ratio in the bar chart After that the tourist are slightly increasing till 1990.which is the most highest increase of tourist eventually,the sudden decrease occur in 1991 which indicates the reduction.Further more the gradually increased occur till 1995.

While in the given line graph the Japanese tourists visiting Australia started increasing in 1985 from approx 2% constently .In between this increasing the trend was breaked in 1988 from 4.5% to 4% and then started increasing once again till it reached its highest point of approx 6% in 1993 year.

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tourist: 5

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The description of the trends is not always clear or accurate, and there are some language errors. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and using more precise language to describe the trends. Also, ensure that the grammar and vocabulary are accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The overview is vague and doesn't provide a clear summary of the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and the connections between ideas are not always clear. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall flow of the report. Consider using signposting language to guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive. There are instances of inaccurate word choice ('presents' instead of 'presence', 'constently' instead of 'constantly'). Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data. Use synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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