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Band 5+: The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image presents two charts detailing a survey on adult education; the first chart reveals reasons why adults decide to study: interest in subject 40%, to gain qualifications 38%, helpful for current job 22%, to improve prospects of promotion 20%, enjoy learning/studying 20%, to be able to change jobs 12%, to meet people 9%. The second segment is a pie chart illustrating opinions on sharing costs of courses: taxpayer 25%, individual 40%, employer 35%.

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The bar chart below gives information about the motivations of adults for contunuing their education and pie chart illustrates the amount of money for each course.

The most popular reason almotst 40% of students is that people are interested in specific subjects. The second reason is nearly the same percentage with first one, accordingly 38% amateurs want to improve qualifications. 22% of person think studing will assist them in their job. The promotion wanting and enjoy studing are the same level, each of motivations is 20%. Jobs changing and new people knowing are less chosen reasons for continue studying, respectively 12% and 9%.

The pie chart shows the much money spend for individual courses, accordingly 40%, then employer course the middle preffered. It is only 35%. Taxpayer costs are 25% which is the lest money speng among other costs.

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Task Response

The report covers the main points of the charts and provides relevant data. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report mentions 'the amount of money for each course' which is not entirely accurate; the pie chart shows opinions on how the costs should be shared, not the actual amounts spent. Also, the writing could be more precise and use a wider range of vocabulary. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and refining your language to avoid ambiguity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat clear, with an attempt to address both charts in separate paragraphs. However, the flow of information within each paragraph is not always smooth, and the transitions between ideas could be improved. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and ideas, and ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus.

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The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('amateurs' instead of 'adults'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data, which affects the clarity of the report. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends, and focus on using more precise language to convey the information accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('studying will assist'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('much money spend'). These errors impede the reader's understanding. Focus on improving your grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions.

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