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Band 5+: The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the usa consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much, Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

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The image shows three pie charts depicting the percentage of daily intake of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed in meals and snacks for an average person in the USA; Sodium: Breakfast 14%, Lunch 29%, Dinner 43%, Snacks 14%; Saturated Fat: Breakfast 16%, Lunch 26%, Dinner 37%, Snacks 21%; Added Sugar: Breakfast 16%, Lunch 19%, Dinner 23%, Snacks 42%.

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The given pie charts illustrate proportion of daily intake of different nutrients such as sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed in each meals and snacks by average individual in USA. This nutrients may be considered unhealthy if, it is eaten in excess amount.

In general, intake of sodium during dinner accounted at the highest shares in USA. Meanwhile, saturated fat and added sugar shows the similar percentage for breakfast. Likewise, snacks depicts the largest proportion intake in terms of added sugar.

Initially, the USA refugees like to consume more amount of sodium during dinner as it shows the highest percentage at 43%. Followed by, 29% for lunch and 14% for breakfast and snacks respectively. In contrast, the percentage of daily intake of saturated fat occupied at 37% by the USA citizens during their dinner time. During the time of lunch and breakfast the percentage of saturated fat in individuals daily intake accounted at 26% and 21% respectively. However, at breakfast time it shows the least percentage at only 16%. Regarding added sugar, snacks time shows the largest shares at 42%. Whereas, the USA peoples don’t like to eat much added sugar in their dinner time as its percentage occupied at only 23% which is considered as the half of the snack time. For, lunch and breakfast the added sugar shows some similarity as their percentage is accounted at 19% and 16% respectively.

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percentage: 7

added: 6

intake: 5

sugar: 5

shows: 5

breakfast: 5

saturated: 4

snacks: 4

during: 4

dinner: 4

daily: 3

sodium: 3

accounted: 3

lunch: 3

respectively: 3

their: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the three pie charts and making relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for each nutrient. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that slightly detract from the clarity. For instance, 'USA refugees' is an incorrect term, and the sentence 'This nutrients may be considered unhealthy if, it is eaten in excess amount' contains grammatical errors. Additionally, the report omits the comparison between sodium and saturated fat at dinner, which are both highest at that meal. To improve, focus on precise language, correct terminology, and ensure all key comparisons are highlighted. Overall, the response is well-organized and covers the main points, but minor lapses in accuracy and expression prevent it from achieving a higher band.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, 'the USA refugees' is an odd and confusing term, and the sentence 'For, lunch and breakfast the added sugar shows some similarity as their percentage is accounted at 19% and 16% respectively' is grammatically awkward and affects readability. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on one nutrient or comparison. Also, avoid informal or incorrect expressions and ensure the overall message is easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'proportion', 'shares', 'percentage', 'accounted for'), but there are several inaccuracies and unnatural choices. For example, 'the USA refugees' is incorrect, and 'the USA peoples' is not standard English. The phrase 'don't like to eat much added sugar' is too informal for an academic report. To improve, use more precise and formal vocabulary, such as 'individuals' instead of 'peoples', and avoid colloquial expressions. Also, ensure that terms like 'shares' and 'percentage' are used consistently and correctly. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'illustrate proportion' should be 'illustrate the proportion', 'in each meals' should be 'in each meal', and 'This nutrients' should be 'These nutrients'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. The sentence 'Followed by, 29% for lunch and 14% for breakfast and snacks respectively' is incomplete and awkward. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures with accurate grammar, and proofread to correct basic errors. Ensure that each sentence is complete and correctly punctuated.

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