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Band 7+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into ful-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two bar charts with numerical data regarding the destinations of UK graduates and postgraduates (excluding full-time work) in 2008. The first chart for graduates shows: Part-time work - 17,735; Voluntary work - 3,500; Further study - 16,235; Unemployment - 7,200. The second chart for postgraduates presents: Part-time work - 2,535; Voluntary work - 345; Further study - 2,725; Unemployment - 1,625. The data is measured in numbers of individuals for each category.

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The charts show what UK graduates and postgraduates did after leaving college in 2008, not including full-time work.

Overall, it is clear that further study was the most popular choice for both groups, while voluntary work was the least popular. Also, graduates numbers are much higher than postgraduates.

Looking at graduates, about 29,665 students went to further study, which is the highest number. Around 17,735 did part-time work. Unemployment was also high, with 16,235 people. However, only 3,500 graduates did voluntary work, so it is the lowest.

For postgraduates, the trend is similar but numbers are smaller. Around 2,725 students continued further study. About 2,535 worked part-time. Unemployment was 1,625, which is less than graduates. Voluntary work was again the lowest, with only 345 people.

In conclusion, both graduates and postgraduates show similar patterns, but graduates have more people in all categories.

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B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

graduates: 7

postgraduates: 3

further: 3

study: 3

voluntary: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the charts and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, particularly in the third paragraph. For example, the report states that 'about 29,665 students went to further study', but the chart indicates 16,235 graduates went to further study. Also, the report states that unemployment was high with 16,235 people, but the chart indicates 7,200 graduates were unemployed. To improve, ensure that all data cited is accurate and directly supported by the visual information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, overview, detailed paragraphs for each group, and a conclusion. The information is presented logically, and the main features are identified. However, there's room for improvement in the transitions between sentences and ideas to enhance the flow. For example, in the third paragraph, linking the sentences more smoothly could improve coherence. Also, avoid repetition by using synonyms.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information effectively. The choice of words is generally appropriate, but there are opportunities to use more precise or sophisticated language to describe the data and comparisons. For instance, instead of saying 'numbers are much higher,' you could use more specific comparative terms. Also, avoid repetition by using synonyms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. The sentence structures are varied, and the punctuation is generally accurate. However, attention to detail in proofreading could eliminate the few grammatical errors present. For example, check subject-verb agreement and correct any instances of incorrect word usage.

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