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Band 5+: The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two bar charts. The first chart is titled "Percentage who watch reality shows" with percentages for each category: Male 50, Female 70, ages 16-24 at 50, ages 25-34 at 60, ages 35-44 at 60, and ages 45+ at 70. The second chart is titled "Percentage who watch game shows" showing Male 60, Female 60, ages 16-24 at 30, ages 25-34 at 40, ages 35-44 at 50, and ages 45+ at 70.

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THE GIVEN BAR CHARTS GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT TWO TYPES OF TV PROGRAMMES OBSERVED BY MALES AND FAMALES IN FOUR VARIOUS GROUPS IN COUNTRY WHICH WAS NAMELY AUSTRALIA.

OVERALL, IN BOTH TYPES OF SHOWS’ FIGURES STAY STABLE. BUT, NUMBER OF PEOPLE WHO WATCH REALITY SHOWS MORE THAN GAME SHOW’S. WHEN IT COMES TO GAME SHOWS’ NUMBER IT IS ALSO POPULAR ACTIVITY AMONG PEOPLE.

AT FIRST, THERE ARE A LOT OF GROUPS OF PEOPLE. ON THE ONE HAND, IN FIRST CHART FAMALES SHOW THE TOP NUMBERS AMONG ALL WATCHERS WITH APPROXIMATELY 72%. WHAT IS MORE 45+ AGED INDIVIDUALS ALSO ILLUSTRATE ONE OF THE LARGER FIGURE WITH AROUND 70%. IN CONTRAST THE LOWEST FIGURE WAS SHOWN BY MALES’ GROUP IN WATCHING REALITY SHOWS WITH ABOUT ONLY 35%.

SECONDLY,IN 45+ AGED INDIVIDUALS WHO WATCH GAME SHOWS ILLUSTRATE THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGES THAN OTHERS WITH ABOUT 70%. NOT ONLY THAT, BUT MALES ALSO HAD THE LARGER ONE, WITH 65%. AT LAST, AMONG 25-34 AGED PEOPLE WATCHING GAME SHOWS ACTIVITY IS THE LEAST POPULAR IN GIVEN CHART.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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shows: 4

about: 3

people: 3

among: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization and accuracy. The overview is present but could be more specific. The body paragraphs contain some inaccuracies in the data reported and could benefit from clearer organization and more precise language. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using more precise language, and ensuring a clear and logical structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. The introduction could be more concise, and the overall summary needs clearer connections between the data points. Paragraphing is present, but the transitions between paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a logical progression of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There is some repetition of words and phrases. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific to the context of describing charts and trends. For example, instead of 'number of people,' consider using 'proportion,' 'percentage,' or 'viewership.' Also, avoid informal language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and preposition choice. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and carefully proofread for grammatical errors. Pay attention to correct tense usage and ensure that sentences are grammatically sound.

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