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The image shows bar charts comparing the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution (traffic, train, aircraft, industry) in millions, in city and rural areas. In the city: Traffic: 60, Train: 15, Aircraft: 5, Industry: 1. In rural areas: Traffic: 35, Train: 10, Aircraft: 3, Industry: 1.

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The two bar graphs illustrate how many people suffered from four specific types of noise disturbance in Europe in 2007, traffic, train, aircraft,and industry, during the day and night shifts.People affected from those types of pollutions are measured in millions.

Overall, noise pollution in throughout the day was consistently higher than that of night shifts in both urban area and rural places, with the traffic category constituting the biggest share. Conversely, noise pollution in industry sites were so negligible that only citizens were slightly affected by this in day shifts and it was not exist in rural places.

Sound disturbance that people affected the most in urban areas was the traffic category, with constituting about 60 million and just under 50 million in both parts of the day, respectively. Depite having significantly less numbers than the leader of the chart, noise disturbance coming from trains was the second highest figure among all categories, making up at about 10 and 8 million in both respective shifts. Aircraft category disturbed the insignificant numbers of people in both parts of the day, about 3 and 1 million.

Despite having less numbers than urban areas, noise congestion coming from traffic was a major problem there either, over 30 millions in day part and about 25 millions in the night. As for train, it affected about 9 millions of people in sunny part of the day, approximately 8 millions of people in the night shift. Statistics for aircraft were the same as the rural areas. There was no any noise pollution from industry disturbed the people.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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people: 6

noise: 6

about: 5

traffic: 4

night: 4

affected: 4

millions: 4

disturbance: 3

industry: 3

pollution: 3

shifts: 3

urban: 3

rural: 3

category: 3

areas: 3

million: 3

numbers: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the data for city and rural areas. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 'just under 50 million' for city traffic at night, 'about 10 and 8 million' for trains) and minor omissions (e.g., the exact figures for industry noise in rural areas are not clearly stated). The language is generally appropriate, but there are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrases (e.g., 'noise pollution in throughout the day', 'Depite having significantly less numbers'). To improve, focus on precise data reporting and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing, such as 'noise pollution in throughout the day' and 'it was not exist in rural places.' The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent, and some sentences are difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using clear topic sentences and ensuring that each paragraph has a single main idea. Also, avoid abrupt shifts between urban and rural data without clear signposting.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'suffered from,' 'disturbance,' 'constituting the biggest share'). However, there are several inaccuracies and unnatural collocations, such as 'noise congestion,' 'sunny part of the day,' and 'insignificant numbers.' The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are repeated (e.g., 'affected'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'accounted for,' 'represented,' 'recorded') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement issues ('industry sites were so negligible'), incorrect verb forms ('it was not exist'), and missing articles ('in both parts of the day'). There is some attempt at complex structures, but they are often flawed (e.g., 'with constituting about 60 million'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, such as missing commas in lists. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures accurately, and proofread carefully for common errors like tense consistency and plural forms.

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