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Band 5+: The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates.

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The image illustrates a structure with a reflective roof covering and skylight tailored for warm and cold climates. In a warm climate, skylights allow light in while heat escapes upwards; in a cold climate, a triple-glazed skylight maximizes light and heat retention. The structure includes underground floor sun protection to block heat, insulation to prevent heat transfer, and underground floor heat retention, suggested by an arrow denoting heat flow.

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The diagram illustrated above shows the design principle for an energy-efficient house and how it works in different climates such as cold climate and warm climate.

As we can see the lower layer of this design is made of an insulating material that will help prevent heat from passing through something. There is an underground floor sun protection and an underground floor heat retention present as well. The yellow arrow mark represents the flow of heat, on the other side we have a reflective roof covering as well that reflects the skylight also. During the warm climate the flow of heat will be upwards as shown in the diagram and during the cold climate the flow of heat will be downwards, so there will be a triple-glazed skylight light & heat maximized.

In conclusion, this is a very efficient house design and the insulation applied will help to minimize the heat inside the house and keep it cool from inside, no matter the climate is a cold one or a warm one.

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climate: 4

design: 3

house: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main design features and their functions in different climates. However, it contains some inaccuracies and lacks clarity in key areas. For instance, the description of heat flow in cold climates is vague, and the conclusion incorrectly states that insulation keeps the house cool, whereas the design aims to maintain a comfortable temperature by retaining heat in cold climates and blocking heat in warm climates. To improve, ensure that the purpose of each design element is clearly explained and that the conclusion accurately reflects the overall function of the house.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion, but the flow of ideas is sometimes disrupted. The description of the design features is not logically organized, and the transition between the warm and cold climate explanations is abrupt. Use clearer paragraphing and linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Furthermore') to improve the logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'insulating material', 'reflective roof covering', and 'triple-glazed skylight'. However, there is repetition (e.g., 'flow of heat' used multiple times) and some imprecise phrasing (e.g., 'prevent heat from passing through something', 'reflects the skylight also'). Expand your range of synonyms and use more precise technical language to enhance clarity and sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect readability. For example, 'The diagram illustrated above shows' should be 'The diagram above illustrates', and 'the flow of heat will be upwards' is less natural than 'heat flows upwards'. There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. Work on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions to improve accuracy.

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