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The image presents 2015 tea and coffee consumption in kilograms per person across seven countries: Australia with tea at 0.8 kg and coffee at 3 kg, Canada with tea at 1 kg and coffee at 6.5 kg, New Zealand with tea at 1 kg and coffee at 3.8 kg, Russia with tea at 3.5 kg and coffee at 1 kg, Turkey with tea at 6.8 kg and coffee at 0.4 kg, United Kingdom with tea at 5.8 kg and coffee at 1 kg, United States with tea at 0.8 kg and coffee at 4 kg.

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The bar chart illustrates tea and coffee consumption in 2015,showing the six highest consumptions tea and coffee countries in the world who is divided into 2 periods.

Overall,the number of kilograms per person consuming coffee outnumbered those consuming tea.Although both drinks were relatively different between the countries,there was some similarities,especially in the United Kingdom’s when both sides have same bar chart.

with regards to coffee chart bar the trajectory was more consistent from California,United States and Australia,New Zealand approximately doubled and tripled.Bar chart illustrate the tea trajectory appeard less consistent.Furthermore bar chart demonstrate superiority of tea from Russian and Turkey which means society in these countries prefer more tea than coffee.In addition,United Kingdom remains similar consumption tea and coffee.

in conclusion,the main features is which society in different countries prefer taste in drinks.The 2015 bar chart demonstrate the significant superiority consumption coffee than tea in most countries,indicating a stronger global preference for coffee at that time.

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The report attempts to address the task but includes some irrelevant and inaccurate information. The description of the data is not always clear, and there are issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on accurately describing the main features of the diagram, using precise language, and ensuring grammatical correctness.

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The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices. There is a reliance on simple vocabulary, and more sophisticated or precise language could be used to describe the data and trends. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing data (e.g., trends, comparisons, quantities) and practice using a wider range of synonyms. Pay attention to the correct usage of words and phrases in context, and avoid using informal or colloquial language.

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