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Band 5+: The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish.

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The image contains a diagram that illustrates the process of producing smoked fish; the process starts with fishing, then moving to a port, freezing, being cut open, washing in fresh water, smoking the fish with additional yellow coloring, freezing again at 0 degrees Celsius, storing in a cold store, distributing the product, and finally selling in a fish store.

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The bar chart shows how smoked fish is produced. Overall, the whole process consists three main stages, starting from catching and transporting the fish to port, following by the main process of smoking and then distributing the final product to the stores.

First of all, fish in particular amounts are caught, after which delivered to to the port. In the port, the fish, initially, go through the process of freezing and thawing in the fresh water. Before being kept in salted water and coloured to yellow fish is cut in half.

After that, the smoked item is packaged and freezed in 0 degrees. Before being completely finished, the product is rested in a cold storage. In a final stage, the ready fish is distributed to fish stores by huge trucks, ready for consuming.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The report effectively covers the main stages of the smoked fish production process, with a clear overall structure and logical sequencing. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as mentioning 'salted water' and 'coloured to yellow' which are not fully aligned with the visual description, and the report incorrectly refers to a 'bar chart' instead of a diagram. Additionally, some steps like 'washing in fresh water' and the specific freezing details are not fully captured. To improve, ensure the report accurately reflects the visual information and uses correct terminology for the type of visual. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure and attempts to use cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'First of all', and 'After that'. However, there are some lapses in coherence, particularly in the second paragraph where the sequence of steps is unclear (e.g., freezing and thawing, then salting and coloring). The use of 'following by' instead of 'followed by' and the awkward phrasing 'Before being kept in salted water and coloured to yellow fish is cut in half' disrupts the flow. To improve, ensure each step is clearly linked to the next and use a wider range of cohesive devices more accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but limited and sometimes imprecise. For example, 'coloured to yellow' is awkward and could be replaced with 'colored yellow' or 'given a yellow color'. 'Huge trucks' is informal; 'large trucks' or 'lorries' would be more appropriate. The phrase 'ready for consuming' should be 'ready for consumption'. To improve, use a wider range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'processed', 'preserved', 'distributed') and ensure word choices are natural and accurate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures. For instance, 'consists three main stages' should be 'consists of three main stages'; 'following by' should be 'followed by'; 'delivered to to the port' has a repeated preposition; 'freezed' should be 'frozen'; 'rested in a cold storage' should be 'stored in cold storage'. There is also a lack of variety in sentence structures, with many simple or run-on sentences. To improve, focus on using a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences accurately, and proofread for common errors.

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