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Band 4+: The diagram demonstrates monthly sales of vacuum cleaners by brand name in five prominent cities of Canada, in thousands of units.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing Dyson, Electrolux, and Hoover sales figures across five cities. In Vancouver: Dyson 450, Electrolux 150, Hoover 100. Montreal: Dyson 600, Electrolux 100, Hoover 200. Calgary: Dyson 1200, Electrolux 300, Hoover 100. Ottawa: Dyson 900, Electrolux 100, Hoover 50. Edmonton: Dyson 300, Electrolux 50, Hoover 50.

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The bar graph illustrates monthly sales data of different brand vaccum cleaners in different cities of canada.

Overall, the calgary and ottawa have highest sales of nearly 1150 and 1100 dyson vaccum which is a high spike in sales of vaccume industry by holding 1st place in sales across all five cities of Canada. sales of dyson in vancouver is areound 550 which is almost same as sales in montreal and in Edmonton more than 300 units sold.

Hence, Hoovers sales never spiked the sales of other competetive brands hovever the sales are equal with elecrolux only in montreal which is areound 250 units. Sales of electrolux in vanucouver, calgary, and ottawa are around 550, 200 which remains same in ottawa and 100 in edmonton. lowwest sales of vaccume is in ottava and the brand is hoover which is not more then 70 uinits and highest of its sold in vancouver more than 500 units were sold

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The report attempts to address the task by describing the bar graph, but it contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but specific data points are often incorrect or vague (e.g., Dyson sales in Vancouver, Calgary, and Ottawa are misreported). The report also fails to provide a clear comparison across all brands and cities, and some statements are confusing or contradictory. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends, comparing the brands and cities clearly, and ensuring all key data points are correctly reported. Organize the information logically, perhaps by brand or by city, and avoid vague or incorrect figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The overall trend is mentioned, but the details are presented in a somewhat random order, making it difficult for the reader to follow. To improve, structure the report with a clear introduction, an overview paragraph highlighting key trends, and body paragraphs that group data by brand or city. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'whereas') to link ideas and ensure each paragraph has a central focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'vaccum', 'vaccum cleaners', 'competetive', 'hovever', 'areound', 'lowwest', 'uinits'). There is some attempt to use comparative language (e.g., 'highest sales', 'lowest sales'), but the range is narrow. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'outperform', 'trail behind', 'comparable figures', 'peak', 'trough') and ensure correct spelling. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'high spike' and use more formal academic language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('sales of dyson in vancouver is'), incorrect pluralization ('different brand vaccum cleaners'), and inconsistent tense usage. Punctuation is often missing or incorrect, and sentence structures are frequently incomplete or run-on. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct subject-verb agreement and proper punctuation. Review basic grammar rules, such as using 'the' before 'Calgary' and 'Ottawa' (as they are specific cities) and ensuring that verbs agree with their subjects. Practice using a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, to demonstrate greater grammatical range.

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