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Band 4+: The diagram demonstrates monthly sales of vacuum cleaners by brand name in five prominent cities of Canada, in thousands of units.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing Dyson, Electrolux, and Hoover sales figures across five cities. In Vancouver: Dyson 450, Electrolux 150, Hoover 100. Montreal: Dyson 600, Electrolux 100, Hoover 200. Calgary: Dyson 1200, Electrolux 300, Hoover 100. Ottawa: Dyson 900, Electrolux 100, Hoover 50. Edmonton: Dyson 300, Electrolux 50, Hoover 50.

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The tables illustrates mounthly sales of vacuum cleaners by brand in five major Canadian cities, measured in thousands of units.

Overall, the sales of the Dyson was higher than Electrolux and Hoover. Bouth the Hoover and Electrolux sales more Vancouver while the Dyson sales was high in every vacum cleaners.

In terms of sales in Vancouver the brand Dyson was around 570 on this asopposed to exactly around 560 the brand Electrolux while the sales of Hoover was approximetely 330. The sales in Montreal of the Dyson was higher than Electrolux amd Hoover (around 580 and 280 respecrively). When it comes to in Calgary, sales of Dyson was around whole 1170 while the Electrolux was around 250 and the Hoover just around 70. Sales in Ottawa of the Dyson was around 1100, the Electrolux was around 240 and Hoover with just around 50. In Edmonton Dyson sales was around 340 while the Electrolux with around 80 and Hoover with just around 60.

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sales: 10

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electrolux: 7

hoover: 7

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brand: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main features of the graph, but it contains significant inaccuracies in the data reported. The organization is present but not very clear, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and organizing the information more logically, perhaps by discussing each brand separately or comparing sales across cities more effectively. Also, work on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The information is presented in a way that is difficult to follow, and there is no clear overall structure. Consider organizing the report into paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data, such as overall trends, comparisons between brands, or sales in specific cities. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and sentences together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. Incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to sales figures, comparisons, and trends. For example, instead of 'high,' use words like 'significant,' 'substantial,' or 'dominant.' Instead of 'around,' use more precise quantifiers like 'approximately' or 'nearly.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word usage. There are also issues with punctuation. Proofread carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors. Focus on using correct verb tenses, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and using articles and prepositions correctly.

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