Map

Band 8+: The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows two floor plans labeled "Existing Plan" and "Proposed Plan." In the Existing Plan, from left to right, there is "Not Part of Existing Gallery," "Temporary Exhibition Space," "Permanent Exhibition Space," "Lobby," and "Office," with an entrance marked on the right. In the Proposed Plan, starting from the left, there is an "Exhibition Store," "Special Exhibition Space," "Permanent Exhibition Space," an entrance in the same place as before, an "Education Area," and a "Store/Plant" area. The layouts maintain the same structural footprint while redistributing space functions.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The first picture shows the layout of an art gallery, and the second shows some proposed changes to it.

In general, there will be considerable changes to the use of floor space in the gallery. There will be a completely new entrance and more space for exhibitions.

Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that the entrance that currently leads to the lobby is planned to be moved to parkiston court, where visitors can walk straight into the exhibition space. At present, there are lobby and office areas near the permanent exhibition space. However, the plan is to redevelop them into an education area and a small storage area.

It is noticeable that the permanent exhibition space is expected to be twice as large, as it is now as it will occupy all the temporary exhibition spaces. In addition, there will be a new room for a science exhibition and an exhibition store. The room is not currently part of the gallery.

Word Count: 165

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

exhibition: 6

space: 5

there: 4

gallery: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report provides a clear overview and highlights key changes, such as the relocation of the entrance and the expansion of the permanent exhibition space. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the entrance is not moved to 'parkiston court' (likely a misreading), and the description of the new entrance and the education area could be more precise. Additionally, the report does not mention the store/plant area in the proposed plan. To improve, ensure all main features are covered and avoid introducing unverified details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure. The introduction and overview are effective, and the body paragraphs logically describe the changes. However, the final sentence is a bit abrupt and could be better integrated into the paragraph. Additionally, the use of cohesive devices is generally good, but there is a slight overuse of 'there' constructions. Overall, the message is easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, with good use of terms like 'redevelop', 'occupy', and 'noticeable'. The report demonstrates a good range of lexical items. However, there is a minor issue with the phrase 'parkiston court' which seems to be a proper noun but is not capitalized correctly. Also, 'as it is now as it will occupy' is slightly awkward. Overall, the lexical resource is strong.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate with a good range of structures, including complex sentences. There are a few minor issues, such as the phrase 'as it is now as it will occupy' which is a bit clumsy, and the final sentence could be improved for clarity. However, these are minor and do not detract from the overall clarity. The report demonstrates a high level of grammatical control.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first picture shows the layout of an art gallery, and the second shows some proposed changes to the gallery space. It is clear that significant changes will be made in terms of the use of floor space in the gallery. There will be a completely new entrance and more space for exhibitions. At present, […]

Band 8+

The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Comprising a set of two floor maps, the diagram compares how an art gallery is set to be evolved in the future. Overall, the most striking alternation encompasses the relocating of the entrance, which is likely to place in the middle of the building. Furthermore, the area is projected to experience a considerable modernization, particularly […]

Band 6+

The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first picture displays the layout of the art gallery, and the second picture presents some proposed changes to the gallery space. Overall, it is clear that significant changes will be made in terms of the floor space in the gallery. There will be a completely different entrance and more spaces for exhibitions. At present, […]

Band 8+

The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the difference between current lay out and suggested plan of a gallery. Overall,it is easy to see that a gallery has experienced major changes in term of design. In addition, it added more space to another purpose such as two temporary exhibition spaces. First of all, the entrance located in the east […]

Band 5+

See All

The two maps demonstrate what happened in Kimsville, from 2002 to the present day

The provided maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in Kimsville between 2002 and the present day. Overall, the town has undergone considerable development over the period shown, with several new residential, commercial and transport facilities added. However, the shopping centre and city centre have remained unchanged. In the northern part of the town, […]

Band 9

The two maps demonstrate what happened in Kimsville, from 2002 to the present day

The provide maps demonstrate the modifications and developments that have take place in Kimsville from 2002 up to the present day. Overall, Kimsville had experienced many transformation through the timeframe. It is noticeable that, the it is transformed into modern town with commercial and transportation facilities. In 2002, In the northern region, a shopping centre […]

Band 5+

The maps below show recent archaeological findings at a historic site in 2004 and 2014. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

The pictures compare the recent archeological discoveries at the historic site- spanning over a ten-year period, starting from 2004 and ending in 2014. Overall, it can easily be seen that the historic site underwent significant changes over the period. Although the ancient template and some of the houses remained unchanged, numerous constructions had been built […]

Band 6+

The maps below describe a town in the Atlantic Ocean affected by a volcanic eruption in 1706. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The provided maps present a town appearance in the Atlantic Ocean before and after the volcanic eruption happened in 1706. Overall, the eruption caused significant loss and damages to economy and accomodations by which it eradicated the whole castle and a number of houses. Therefore, the port experienced no ship throughout the period. Regarding the […]

Band 6+

The two maps below show a town before and after some changes. Write a summary of the main changes. Try to include the following: 1 description of the main changes. 2 comparative and superlative adjectives

The maps illustrate the city changes from 2007 to 2017. Overall, it is immediately apparent that the city has undergone significant redevelopment. The buildings become enormously bigger. Necessary buildings have been increased and more space has been allocated to facilities. Looking at the earlier map, the most prominent features were a school on the right […]

Band 6+

the map shows the change of pentland from 1980 to 2007

The map illustrate the diversity of Pentland between 1980 and 2007. Overall,a yacht marina was built in place of the sea in 2007.The swimming pool was constructed in front of the marina.Furthermore,car park was moved to the western part of Pentland.A road was built near the coast of marina. Houses stood on the south-east corner […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium