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Band 5+: The different leisure activities favoured by Canadian boys and girls.

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The image depicts a bar chart titled "Favourite leisure activities of teenagers in Canada" with four categories: Sports at 30% (boys), 15% (girls); Computer Games at 25% (boys), 10% (girls); Music at 20% (boys), 20% (girls); and Shopping at 35% (girls), 5% (boys).

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The chart compares the proportions of youngers (boys and girls) choices for leisure activities in Canada.

At first glance, it can be seen that the number of boys who prefer shopping had the highest percentage, while the girls who chose shopping as activity had the lowest figure. Moreover, both, boys and girls showed the same interest in music.

Concerning the figure of shopping, the percentage of boys topped the chart with 35% and was the highest choice among boys, while the proportion of girls showed a minimum of interest on shopping and had the lowest percentage about 5%. Furthermore, both boys and girls showed the same number of perference on music and making up approxiately 20%.

With regards to the choices for sport percentage of boys showed the highest figure nearly 30%, when the number of girls showed less interest around 15%. On the percentage of computer games boys had the highest figure nearly 20% while the girls perference was slightly lower comprising below 15%.

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girls: 6

percentage: 5

showed: 5

shopping: 4

highest: 4

figure: 4

number: 3

while: 3

interest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a few areas where the information is not entirely clear. The writing could be more precise, and the structure could be improved for better coherence. For example, the statement about boys preferring shopping the most is incorrect according to the visual description. To improve, ensure accuracy in data representation and organize the information more logically, perhaps by grouping similar trends or comparing and contrasting activities more directly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. Paragraphing could be improved to group related ideas more effectively. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, hindering the overall coherence. For example, the shift from the overview to specific details could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical progression of the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inaccurate word choice (e.g., 'youngers' instead of 'young people'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific to the context of comparing proportions and preferences. Focus on synonyms and more descriptive language to enhance the clarity and impact of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'the number of boys who prefer shopping had the highest percentage' is grammatically incorrect. There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Proofreading carefully for errors before submitting your work is essential.

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